Uppin this slept fuckin shit.......................

Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

wow, nice verse both of you.....
maku~your verse had nice flow and structure, it was more in depth then LE's verse, and had creative punches as well, a good personal about the thread, but the other could have been better, because it was on a crew member, not him, but ok, i liked the opener a lot, it was a nice starter and you came into this with some intensity, i especially liked the last 3 lines and the funny punch "you couldnt be a rider if bill gates cosigned a car for you", funny line......
LE~you verse had good flow as well, kind of shoet but you siad a lot in it, with the personals, nice closer too, but i vote for maku because of his content and descriptive vocab.....nice job both

Uppin ' this slept on fuckin shit...what the hell is wrong with you people?

Uppin' this fuckin shit...Why the hell has it been slept on so much!? Come on get it closed...

Uppin'.

Uppin' on this slept shit...for fuck sakes........

Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

Aiight here we go......
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Opener-Limited
Closer-Maku
Punches-Maku
Personals-Limited
Multies-Maku
Structure-Limited
Metas-Maku
Overall Best Verse-Maku
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.aaight this is a very close battle as you can see....now i dont go for quanity over quality but it seemed like Maku had both of them......Limited if you would have came a lil harder you probly would have won.....Maku work on your structure it was relly the only thing wrong wit your verse..........oh and by the way i would like to see a round two between yall!!!!........V/maku

uppin 4 votes on this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Werd, let's get this shit closed already...for fuck sakes people sleep on shit...

uppin on this one

uppin............................................. ........................

Fuck, let's get this bitch closed..................

Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

aight
close battle.......
real close...
limited ya had some hella nice wordplay, finisher didnt come strong, but overall ya flow an punches were pretty decent...
just needed that finisher to kill him off, but it didnt come...

maku, ya verse was solid as hell, opend it kinda well, an the finisher was tight! punches landed an the personals hit hard, for overral lyrical content maku got this battle...

no hate an return the fave

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