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Cerulean 08-31-04 08:28 AM

this was hot dow... i was feelin your lines and it's nice to see some people can still pour their hearts and minds out in an open mic. the only criticism i would have is your spelling (not that that really matters) and that some of ya lines didn't flow quite perfectly... like parts sounded a bit choppy. all the same, i could really appreciate this, good drop!!

ps. check out my open mic if u get the chance, thanks

Ms.Skillz4daze 08-31-04 08:42 AM

Well I'll be darn, somebody is FINALLY coming with a sense of social consciousness!
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by $LXDiesel
aight so here we some from the hart shit

wut the fuck did this world come to
u can see KKK in Compton just walkin through
u can see all tha racism tha hatin, no love
u see some one kill a man for nothin, and then ask from above
the wars, the drama, the terrorism, head trauma
when they see u sellin drugs they blame it on ur momma
like she couldnt raise a son workin two shifts a day
cuz when i had a beoken leg we could afford to take an XRAY
they never think that all their promises to help the poor
never live out cuz all the money goin out on war
cuz when they say improve the life, they say yeah we will help you presonaly
and nothin happes cuz iraq "supposably" got nuclear weaponry
we got them conflicts and all why, cuz we think we the greatest country
thats why we fuck around with others, instead of teachin people out of county
they give us guns spin army commercials on tv each day
but to say kids stay in school, dont sell drugs, it aint the right way
its to hard for them they to involed in all dat shit of preparin us
to at some point yank us out of school, when war is on and be sendin us
to battle fronts to die cuz they all thin we are most powerfull
but when i hear that i just they ur just fuckin full (OF SHIT)
Cuz how the fuck are u gonna keep a steady country rules
when we only liberate them countries who have oil, or jewels (etc.)
i dont care if u need that fuckin oil or shit
i just care that ma litle bro got shot wit a 9mm gat
so when u gonna get to improvin neighbourhoods
and help the people to stop sellin dope and find their roots
the only way i can provide is sellin dope, and im in trouble wit the government?
IM LOVIN IT, how full of shit this country is and we still live in it

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Yes, yes, YES! Make them know, Man, make them know. It feels good to see you on here droppin' that. Yes. But remember, as Dead Prez says,"If you gon' bang, bang for RBG."

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Klassic 08-31-04 02:26 PM

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Klassic 08-31-04 04:58 PM

whatever i said on page one. UPPIN

LIL'DREW 08-31-04 07:03 PM

nice shit...deep as hell...uppin' <lmao...

Klassic 08-31-04 09:27 PM

uppin

SycklyFlowetic 08-31-04 11:48 PM

very nice a lot of meaning adn feeling in this

Klassic 09-01-04 02:48 AM

uppin

Klassic 09-01-04 06:53 AM

uppin

lilchubs 09-01-04 10:32 AM

this was deep man, its tight good vocab

GangsStarShit 09-01-04 11:55 AM

See this was a nice piece dawg it was a good piece of writing i truely enjoyed reading this verse...keep em comin dawg thats potential fo ya :thumbup:

Klassic 09-01-04 04:39 PM

thanks man uppin


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