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LyRiKaLMiRiKaL 09-01-04 03:42 AM

Voted For: Empire

both verses were good empire came with better personals then j dot......flow and structure was the dame on both sides.....what made it hard to vote on this battle was both verses were all personals..which just makes it hard to breakdown.....i just felt empires were more complex and he came harder with the finisher....thats what seperated this battle...my vote

Vote:J Dot

I.D. 09-01-04 04:08 AM

Voted For: J DOT

felt ya shit more specially da last line wit da kicked out ya own crew it wuz hott no hate 2wardz empire tho he had kool shit 2 tho

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Lyriclesolja 09-01-04 04:38 AM

Voted For: Empire

Aiight ima multi man i like those.......Jdot try to be more complex wit ya rhymes i could actually tell what words were coming next and most of them didnt make sence "look, your not hard, get rid of them 'G' dreams/
Stop talkn shit in threads, and take off yo G string"< didnt relate.....give the voters an explination of why he needs to get rid of those 'G' dreams feel meh???....................Empire nice multies i was feelin those.....but try to make the verse longer next time that was the only thing wrong wit yours....

V/Empire

Lyriclesolja 09-01-04 04:46 AM

More explination on empires part.......Empire i felt came harder.....now im not a person to grade quanity over quality at all..........but i felt that empires had more complexity
than Jdot's.....




Peayce

Klassic 09-01-04 04:51 AM

Voted For: J DOT

aight i liked both PS j dot im not sure if his name wus caliph but if it was then w/e, u both had good punches but j dot u just connected more, structure was off a bit for u though, the lenght of bars and shit, but the vocab definitly goes into j dots favor

granmastr chi 09-01-04 06:25 AM

Voted For: Empire

very close battle

Punches - jdot
Flow - empire
Structure - empire
Multi's - empire
Personals - jdot
Opener - empire
Closer - jdot

Vote - empire

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50Cal. 09-02-04 10:48 AM

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YOUNG_CITY 09-02-04 12:05 PM

Voted For: J DOT

i think dot took thise one with more personals and better structure...he had some nice lines in there, and he had a couple punches that connected.his flow was tight from start to finish
empire had a nice flow, but he fell off in some places.he didnt have as many personals as dot, but he made up for it with punches, but not all the punches connect like he thought they would.this was a nice battle.J DOT i wanna battle you i think that will be a competition

Abraxas 09-02-04 12:07 PM

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 
JUSs checkin

M-Eazy 09-02-04 12:18 PM

aight good lookn people...i'll return a honest vote when you start battlin city...good lookn...lets get some more votes in here...

TeamOne 09-02-04 11:10 PM

Voted For: Empire

I think Empire won this battle........... the flow was off in the opener but u killed him wit punches (next time u dont needa explain em so much) but u did ur thing and i really think bar 2 won this battle for u, it got me laughin and shit......... JDot did ok but his punches didnt hit me as hard as Empires, especially since all of empires lines were good personals and punches

TeamOne 09-02-04 11:12 PM

damn close ass battle......................i think one of these votes should be taken away in my opinion tho/////

50Cal. 09-02-04 11:21 PM

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N.Tavarez 09-02-04 11:23 PM

Voted For: J DOT

damn ya was in the same crew once.....i cant tell now!!!!

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CataclyzM-i-C 09-02-04 11:33 PM

Voted For: J DOT

iight...heres da breakdown...

Empire -

punches...blahh they were weak...nuttin hard hittin son
wordplay...it was pretty simple...nuttin to challenge my thoughts
metas...blahhh...they was pretty wack 2 fam
creativity...it was just ok i guess...nuttin complex
enjoyment...wasnt feelin ur style...n its dumb how u put...FINISHER...that jus makes the verse even gayer...up ur game fam !

J Dot
punches...they was jus str8...alot better then the other nigga cuz at least ur had metas mixed in
wordplay...decent...alil more complex but some barz dint rhyme but i understand wut u was tryin to do tho...decent shyt
metas...u had a few that were str8...all n all it was pretty decent
enjoyment...ur shyt kept me interested...i was feelin some of the barz...good shyt

Vote - J Dot


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