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Voted For: ILLegitimate
ILL...your verse was good..but it was well written, had good imagery and told a nice story. It flowed well and structure was on point....so even i thought it was off topic from beginning to end it was a good drop and I'll give you........7/10 Young......ok your drop was ok, had went into detail more, u would have won this but u didn't i think u didnt ended the story so good tho..good story tho...imagery was aight..jus stay at it cuz u def, gon be good, I'll give ya a........6/10 |
lol i meant mic-wrecker instead of young...my fault..
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Voted For: mic-wrecker
ILLegitimate: You did good with the topic, but u were bouncing all over the place. You did good on the schizophrenic part, cuz it sounds mad confusing. If u could have put more info in this, it would have been tight. mic-wrecker: I liked everything about yours. I followed every line with ease (even though it was lengthy). It had a lot of emotion in it, and it sounded like it was a true story. U got my vote. |
Voted For: mic-wrecker
This is one sided here. mic-wrecker had a much better verse. I loved how the story line led to a twist. It was a nice ending. Throughout I continued to lose track of the flow though. It seems it has structure, but I couldn't match the structure to the flow, know what im sayin? illegitamate, you just didn't have enough details. You came a little trite and predictable. Just too simple for the topic at hand. Even though the flow was nice. I liked that line about droppin lines and prayers though. It was a decent effort. you get some props but mic-wrecker gets my vote |
Voted For: mic-wrecker
yo i like this flow it was a lil to much of tha ordanary shit but it wass koo Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: ILLegitimate
Nice flow...on topic...and nice structure. Some lines mic-wrecker had were hot. But there was times in my mind you went off the subject. Your structure made me abit woozy. It was alot to read and bunched up. But...don't take this as me saying your verse was trash cause it wasn't. Hands down you had a nice verse. I think because ILL stuck on topic and had a sorta story going it was hot. |
Voted For: ILLegitimate
alright im gonna say ILL took this one... it was close.. but his story was just a little more detailed... flow could have been better for both... but im gonna have to go with ILL due to his story being a little better |
Voted For: ILLegitimate
good battle.. illegitimate got my vote though, i liked the story and the vocab in his verse, the rhyme scheme was nice as well.. mic-wrecker i liked ur verse but i didnt follow it as well as illegitimates..no hate v/ill |
jus read the flow an u will see who the clear winner izzz......ME!!!!
stop these bullshit votes an get the real onez in |
Voted For: mic-wrecker
Vote:mic-wrecker Lyrics: mic-wrecker Wordplay:mic-wrecker Multies:mic wrecka Punches:neither Topic coverage: mic wrecka--more detail and sick..mo to do with Iraq less skitso stuff but still gd Overall: mic-wrecker Illegitimate shit was to miscelleanous whereas mic wrekas was mo like a detailed story. Word. |
Voted For: ILLegitimate
wow this battle was pretty good but because ill just plainly had better flow and better verses i have to give it to him.the man knows how to spit about the subject. the other guy needs to step it up cuzc that stuff is weak. anyways my vote is illeginamate. |
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