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Tanto 09-06-04 11:07 PM

Voted For: Sultan

nice elevation sultan.
punches were off the kilter dawg, something i aint neva heard
I know that when I spit....niggaz like u start blushin//
Lyrics burn like the "claps"....U sweat from internal combustion//
I won't hush....I'll touch ya soul like a preacher//
Your lyrics like fine hos....everybody had to "beat" em'//
^^
nice lines, hilarious...
clearly not prewrit'n

50Cal. 09-06-04 11:14 PM

Voted For: Sultan

neither of you had good punches or disses you should both work on that but sultan had the vocab wordplay and flow better then lum and had a better structure so he wins my vote with those being the only things i can fairly vote on plus sultan had a dope ender that was funny as fuck

Sultan 09-07-04 12:14 PM

uppin 4 votes, ppl.....................will return the favor

Dirty Nigga 09-08-04 05:36 PM

Voted For: Sultan

Aight...

Not A Bad Battle
Ya Both Dropped Some Aight Stuff...

Luminaz Had A Few Okay Multies n Some Aight Wordplay, Could Improve Structure n Punches
No Hate Luminaz, Keep Elevatin...

Sultan, Ya Verse Hit Harder, Better Metas n Structure, Connected Bars Better Too..
Still Room For Elevation (As With ALL Rappers *Except Big L*)

Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles

P E A C E


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