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Livin Legend 09-11-04 11:26 PM

Voted For: String9487

opener: string (close one)
meta's: both (great meta's)
multi's: none
structure: both (nice)
flow: string
punches: both
personals: string
closer: leazy

ya both spit some hot shit but my vote goes to string9487

vote:

no hate to any of ya

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Replay 09-11-04 11:32 PM

Voted For: LEazy

ok this was a battle and thats it kinda boring

LE:
first thing when you doing long battles like this don enter twice after each bar
pretty good flow but not the best
punches were ok not good only ok same wit personnals
mullts none that i saw
wack opener and closer
5/10

string:
ever thing you said about him was bad
no skill in writting
the punches you did have were weak and not really about him
ok opener and closer
4/10

winner le

Hitchcock 09-12-04 12:09 AM

uppin for votes

Hitchcock 09-12-04 07:18 PM

uppin for votes holla at ya boy

Hitchcock 09-13-04 09:40 PM

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Hitchcock 09-14-04 05:58 AM

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cordless 09-16-04 11:19 PM

This was feedback posted for LEazy
 
daaaaaaam!!!! this is a hard one to call

LEasy - "after i shoot i watch this cat twitch and fidget/ so this will be short and sweet like homosexuall midgets" runnin em.

string - ya flow aint hot, its overbaked, lines sag like they overweight/ dis clown get "capped" like a Polar State - runnin em.

shits hard. i would say tie but that aint cool....so im sayin LEasy...ONLY because his lines hit hard every time. string had the better beat and flow....but leasy just had the hits. nice battle

Mistic-Rogue 09-17-04 10:00 PM

Voted For: LEazy

ok vote goes to leazy he had better punches.!!! punches to lazy, flow to lazy,intro to lazy,ending to string so overall to lazy. string you need to work on your flow

Hitchcock 09-18-04 03:13 PM

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Hitchcock 09-25-04 03:21 PM

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Hitchcock 09-25-04 07:19 PM

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LEazy 09-30-04 11:13 AM

uppppinnn..this shit is almost closed...i'll vote on ya battle if you vote on this.

Hitchcock 10-03-04 10:37 PM

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SUCC MACOKK 10-03-04 11:25 PM

Voted For: String9487

shit this was some long ass shit...you guys should only drop half as many lines so it isnt as annoying to read...
String-your verse was alot better than LE's because you had some good personals like the closer.Your punches hit hard an your structure wasn't too too bad.I liked 90% of your lines like the rollerskates line,weapons in Iraq(that was a HOTT line) and pretty much every other one.Your flow was nice,and your wordplay witty.
LEazy-your verse sucked,no offence but nothing was really a hardcore diss in there...you had 1 or 2 decent lines, but the rest was plated and wack.Either you didn't try,or you need some serious elevation.Work on your structure,wordplay and ounches because it was all weak.

V/String.

40Cal 10-04-04 06:08 PM

Voted For: String9487

GOOD SHITZ YUNG MEN BUT ONLY ONE CAN WIN AND I CHOSE STRING KUZ HE HAD BETTER/CREATIVE PUNCHES LIKE BATTLE PUNCHES THAT ORANGE JUICE PUNCH THAT l USED WAS KINNAH KIDDY I THOUGHT l WOULD HAVE WON IF HE FLO WASN'T SO LONG EITHER BATTLES CAN'T LAST 10MINUTES KUZ NOT EVERY CAT GONNA READ ALL THAT SHIT YA KNO. YALL BOTH WERE FULL OF GOOD SHIT THO THA NEXT TIME I BATTLE I'LL ONLY DROP THA HOTTEST YALL TEACHIN ME LESSON ON DIS SITE.

WHY: FLOW, STRUCTURE, LEAST LINES WIT BETTER PUNCHES. KEEP DOIN WHAT YALL DO MAYNE YALL BOTH SIK


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