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Voted For: Ice Pick

ice pick took this..

punches- Ice
flow-Ekademic
multis-Ice
wordplay Ice

only thing that Ice pick didn't have was the flow... just structure your verse a little bit better so your punches can have more power... cuz i feel myself stretching out jsut to finish ur bar.... but nice line su worded them pretty good...

vote/ ice pick

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good closer... i give you this on punches and meta's
alone...

U couldnt FREAK it if u battled in the MISSIONARY position '
^^^
lmao- gonna remember that one for a while

vote:
structure: N/A
meta's: EK
punches: EK

oops got the names mixed up... so change that to ice pick

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Ice Pick
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

Ekademic21
Punches were good too not as hard as Ice Pick's tho...
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

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easy win agian both ya strucuter was messed ya flow goes to ice pick punches goes to ice pick and same with the perosnals but this was pretty one sided

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aiiiiiiight

ice got this, better flow, more complex rhyme scheme, an some hella hard hittin punches...

lacked humour ice, but not many people care for humour in rhyes, but i think humour brings the best out of disses...

but on the whole nice drop (loved the missionary position thing, pure genius lol)

ekademic, ya flow was aight..

ya came a lil too elementary if ya feel me?
ya opener was BLAH, an ya finisher wasnt that much better, openers n finishers are sumthin that catch attention, so work on that yea dogg?
nice rhyme tho, just could improve, structure, vocab n metas...
no hate, just bein real with ya'll...

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wow....too much on both parts. both of you need to slim your verses down like crazy. it gets boring after a while to read redundant shit.

ekademic - yo...i stopped readin your shit becuase it got boring man. stop using little words to rhyme like "deny it, like it"...condense it to punch hard man

ice pick - you had some nice ones...but if you were a hard mc your rhymes would be understood without having to explain shit in parenthesies. plus your lines are way too long...what kind of beat was your head flowin to

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