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intensify effect 09-09-04 05:59 PM

Voted For: String9487

vote: string

flow: string way better i thought
punches: alot more effective
creative: string with each line there wasnt no real comp...

NO-HATE but eclusiv u need alot of elevating to do....

Hitchcock 09-09-04 06:17 PM

uppin for votes holl at me n i'll return the favor wit honest votes

Hitchcock 09-09-04 06:18 PM

uppin for votes holla at me n i'll return the favor wit honest votes

Ice Pick 09-09-04 06:49 PM

Voted For: String9487

VVOTE STRING, ok this battle wasnt that good at all in my opinion.,,, STRING I KNOW YOU CAN DO BETTER......

String had better flow , punches, wordplay and structure,,,,

Elusiv, half your shit eiether didnt ryhme or has been said 1000's of times... No beef dude but you should up your vocab and try to use creative punches that will stand out.....
Your verse was real basic with fillerish misdirected punches....

Go hit up my battle with typical

Acuity 09-10-04 08:08 AM

uppin ansd uppin y'all....................................

Acuity 09-10-04 12:51 PM

uppin uppin y'all..................................gd votes only!!

Hitchcock 09-10-04 05:32 PM

uppin for votes holla at me n i'll return the favor wit honest opinions or PM if u'd like one faster

Livin Legend 09-10-04 06:51 PM

Voted For: String9487

vote: String9487

String9487: great punchlines, good personals, good structure, good wordplay, great metaphors, great opener, good closer, not alot of multi's

ElusivG: ok punches, ok personals, ok structure, good wordplay, ok metaphors, not really any mult's, weak opener and closer

no beef but my vote is string9487

Acuity 09-10-04 07:11 PM

uppin dis y'all uppin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

TURBAN 09-10-04 08:04 PM

This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
 
ight elusiv this is the second battle of yours i've read, i like ya shit ,feelin it but it dosent rhyme this is not a hate thing i'm jus saying you could rip cats a new one if u had a better rhyme scheme think bout it peace out

Sik Wit It 09-10-04 09:53 PM

Voted For: String9487

String9487
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

Elusiv G
Punches were good too not as hard as String9487's tho...
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...


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