This was feedback posted for Yvonne
 

blah both wasnt as good id give this vote to yvonne for having more consistency and stronger punches

iight uppin this shit yo

Voted For: Yvonne

im voting on yvonne cuz this so called 'g' fucked up on his verse,lemme point it out-U shud confess, dat women jus can't handle stress-thats directed at all women,not her specifically
-but u must b heaven sent-arent you supposed to insult her,not call her an angel??
-well girl lick the cream off ma bak n the chocolate from ma crack-you got problems,thats sum weird kinky shit
and she had better wordplay than urs,half ur shits just there to rhyme,it dun make sense,this shit mite sound biased,it aint,this is just the truth

Voted For: Elusiv G

Tough battle to judge. Didn't see no punches that stuck out. So I fogot about the punches and went to multi...didn't see any of them. So I went to structure and G's was abit better. Plus you went longer so you had abit of a edge on Yvonne. But it was a close battle. Both came hard at each other. Keep it up.

o...return da favor and peep 1 of my battles too please. :help:

send the links then



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Voted For: Elusiv G

g took it...betta punches...betta structure and flow...betta wordplay...he came wit mo energy 2...
yvonne didnt come as hard...and the punches werent as strong...but overall...nice battle...

Voted For: Yvonne

Yvonne wins.
Punches were harder hitting,structure steady, line 1+2 didnt rhyme so fuck that off, make it rhyme next time.

Elusiv G structure was shit needs to all flow like..
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all lines the same length or a liittle bit over. punches were ok bit weak.
Pz.