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-   -   Tha Phoenix vs X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148269)

Tha Phoenix 09-11-04 04:26 AM

Uppin for votes people!!!! Don't sleep on this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tha Phoenix 09-11-04 02:32 PM

Yo Uppin this shit!!!!! DON'T SLEEP ON IT PEOPLE, COME ON, VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Tha Phoenix 09-12-04 04:59 AM

Yo Uppin This Shit, Don't Sleep On This People!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tha Phoenix 09-12-04 09:00 AM

Yo uppin this shit. damn you people sleep on some verses, goddamnit.

lyriclord 09-12-04 09:18 AM

This was feedback posted for Tha Phoenix
 
tha pheonix took this with good flow, punches, structure. right from the start you were good. not realy likin your endin tho, rhyming "you" with "you".

lyriclord 09-12-04 11:17 AM

why cant i vote ? i didnt have 20 posts when i posted my feedback. can i vote now tho ?

Tha Phoenix 09-13-04 02:42 AM

Yo can you vote on this shit. Favours will be returned...

Spektikul 09-13-04 03:14 AM

Voted For: Tha Phoenix

yo, I feel Phoenix had a better verse. Although both were tight.

Phoenix: Harder Punches, better wordplay, very creative at times.

Naughty boy: you had good vocab and alright punches. Structure needs to be cleaned up, I wasnt feelin it. I also do not like self-glorifying lines which you had a few, one more thing, I dont like lines ppl write that are like "your gay" "you suck" "you rape ppl" "ill punch you" Cause its all fake, and you dont know anything about your opponent on here...use real punches and if you wanna say that stuff to them, be creative with it like in metas or somethin, ya know?

Props to both tho, good verses, but this one in my opinion goes to Phoenix...peace...

Spektikul 09-13-04 03:16 AM

Please leave feed/vote with an honest explaination on my battle, as I have just done for you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...565909&posted=1 Thank you very much...peace...

Tha Phoenix 09-13-04 11:45 AM

Uppin for votes, that would be three votes in about a month.... Great

Tha Phoenix 09-14-04 02:26 AM

Yo, uppin this shit.............................................. ...................................

creative 09-14-04 01:02 PM

This was feedback posted for Tha Phoenix
 
ayo This Nigga Stole His Lines Form Rapdawg Dont Vote Fo Him..

Tha Phoenix 09-14-04 01:15 PM

Learn to spell ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Uppin

Tha Phoenix 09-15-04 11:05 AM

Yo, there's two pages of me uppin, can u people vote on this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tha Phoenix 09-16-04 02:52 AM

Damn you people sleep on shit, UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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