Voted For: Sultan

decent battle i guess.

sultan your verse would look alot better if ya took all the ()//"" < characters out of it..makes it easier to read, and helps on the enjoyment..

also, fix your rhyme scheme up, because it seems like theyre all over the place..

punches- sultan (some creative ones)
personals- none, really..
werdplay- sultan.
flow- tie.
multis- ?
vote- sultan..

decent battle.

drop an honest vote here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148270

nice lil' battle sultan
one day we will battle
you's my nigga

uppin this.. let's get this thing closed out with some honest votes ppl

Voted For: Sultan

Sultan -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

Ill G. -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

ill g. elevate more

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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

Vote: ill

Lyrics: ill
Wordplay: sultan
Originality: tied
Opening: ill
Ending: sultan
Punches:ill
Personals: neither
Multies: neither really
Flow: ill

Overall: an aight battle but ill came stronger and less wit da "fuk,bitch suk a dik" type crap im gettin acustomed to seeing. Peace, return favour!

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Ill Gram (No Pun Intendid) ... Jus Checkin Out Sum Of Ya Shit ... Lookin Good ... Still ... lOl ...

No multies?... ya might wanna read my verse again homie....lol

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

gramatix, your flow rolled off the tongue easier than the sultan's mommas pussy juice

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

It's time to dine...and I hope ya hungry//
Rhymes like "wild turkey suprise"....leavin guts rumbling like Bugs Bunny*//
And niggaz say I rule lines like Tommy (Maddox)//
^^^^^^^^^^^^ nice opener homie,,,,,,, nice punch too

Put the "Steal" to ya "ears" (Steelers)//
Give ya a "package" (a lost)//
Motivate ya ass to start running//
I treat this shit like "Monopoly"//
Cuz I "Shoot" niggaz off "Ladders", tryin' to elevate on my "property"**//
This battle's locked up//
I can't say if ya "pussy or an asshole"...either way, ya gettin "fucked"//
^^^^^^^^^^^^ o aight mayne u had flow and punches ur gettin heated~!

And, ain't no way you can recover, dude//
Cuz I'll leave a nigga in the "dark"....like the girl on 3LW***//
U wanna be a "Rebel"....chillin', "Campin"//
Until I "Nick" a piece of ya jaw....courtosy of my shinny, chrome "Cannon"//
Sultan knows that his rhymes are brutal//
U can tell by my opponent's name....I've been had his "Stamp-of-Approval"//
And this shit came straight from my mental//
I've packed your shit up....cuz there's new management at "Merk Central"//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ha ha ha nice closa and dem punches meta'z mayne (whoa) keep at it

just look above me... that bullshyt that was dropped was just "in-sultan"
like old school R&B songs done again by Michael Bolton (lol)
^^^^^^^^^^^ oooooooooooo nice opener mayne w/punch

Original rhymes... and yo lines? they come a dime a dozen
Ya lyrics ain't buzzin' cousin! Stop breaking the bank for nothin'!
I'm crushing ya flow, crushing ya hopes, crushing ya dreams
you just a textee with a rap career that's stuck in a screen
It's gon' take more than just a mere noobie to do me
You ain't "Scrappy" enough; I think you need to go and find "Shaggy and Scooby"
and pray that "Velma" can come up with a hypothetical thoery
cuz without that... there ain't no other way you gettin' near me
^^^^^^^^^^^ ha ha ha ha ha ha ha what! nice punches homie dats wayyyyyyyy harder mayne (fiya) keep at it lets read da closa

back that ass up or get clapped with the quickness
death by Ill-Grammatix's ya fastest to seeing sickness
I'll flip ya simplistic linguistics and leave you mentally twisted
so that ya brain no longer knows that you existed
acidic flows I spit at foes with hits thats crit-i-cal
landing blows like Riddick Bowe while you crying "Quit it, yo!"...
lmao

^^^^^^^^^ nice closa da whole verse had some throwin punches mayne// nice


i vote for ill grammatix cause he had me with da scooby line (lol) plus he had an lil personal and a punch

sultan u had good verse homie u had punches throwin but i voted for G becuz he had da personal and a punch to go with it and plus dat scooby line (lol)

v-Grammatix for personal and punches and dat scooby line (lol)

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

yo nice battle
lil wins this 1 close battle tho
lil had beter punches n per, met n all that hes won this 1
plz return da fav on 1 of my battlez in my sig
pz out



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