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This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
wow...some1 is wilin...that nigga gangstarr is garbageeeeeeee...lol jus thot i shud post my feedback cuz i can do dat...i dint actually read all of shottas verse cuz that shyt was ridiculously long but im guessin that gang got smashed lmao...pease niggaz...or shud i sed pease nigga and pease whiteboy !
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Voted For: GangsStarShit
Aiight. Personally, I gotta say gss took the battle.. No hate just truth. Shotta, You need to work a lot on your structure, Some of your lines syllable counts were so un-even I had trouble finding the rhyme. There were also some parts I didnt understand the punches in. GSS, your structure was a hell of a lot better then shotta's.. Still had some slightly stretched lines. And some of your punches didnt connect.. But it was a lot easier to read, and the disses were easier to get. Overall, pretty weak battle.. But GSS definatly took it. |
Finally proper votes hey herb i'm talkin to sHoTTa where u at...i see you rollin wit a few new dick lickers...have fun
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Voted For: GangsStarShit
ok nice battle im gonna give it to gangstar cos it flowed better and was more enjoyable to read, shoTTa i liked your verse aswell but the lines were way over streched and way too long to read i got bored of reading it from the forst 6 line... other than that i liked both of your verses... shoTTa had betta punches but gangstars hit the spot they were aimed in the right direction... lemme know if you need some more explainin... |
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
hmm sorta weak battle ps. i hate unlimited line battles structure was a bit off for both flow was D-thug's but flow means nothin without punches remember that shotta had punches and wordplay and THAT wins battles ~1~ |
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