c'mon we need some god damn voters wtf lets go.............

This was feedback posted for insane16
 

just feedback on dis insane you need work on yer vocab thats it the rest was dope inless you werent trying lol:) nice battle tho

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yo dis is insane 16 but my new name is soul sickness but we need to get some fukin voters in here lets get this shyt goin.................

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Voted For: insane16

^harder- hitting punches, his personals were fairly decent.. drag~on u tried to do sum wordplay but tried a lil' too hard, u normally come harder like the line with jockey(jock me)* it was kinda unnecessary cuz the two are pronounced differently.. uhm flow-wise drag~on u did pretty well, but insane16 did much better.. this seem mo' like a one-sided battle.. but vocab was pretty much equal.. structure-wise drag~on took easily, however u should consider not spacin' ya verse..... drag~on u had a lot of self-glorification lines.. which does not help ya verse in battles.. so the opener's given to insane16.. and the closer topic was given to drag~on cuz it had sum humor in it, insane's urs wasn't bad but it did need a different concept it seemed like u always end ur verse with a knife and a gun.. but besides that fact, insane16 came harder period so he takes the vote..
~wun~

uppin to keep this shyt moven lets go we need voters......

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Voted For: insane16

Souls Sickness takes this in my opinion cause he had some decent wordplay and personals like the dirst you drag on line.That was funny.Dragon, you didn;t have very many good lines at all in your verse really, some very elementary punches and personals in there.You talked about the gay thing, had some loosely rhyming words (feramones,room, and strange and canes). Overall you need to develop complexity in your vocab that's all really.
Soul sickness,nothing to elevate on really but you did have some simple lines in there (gun and run) blah.
V/Souls sickness for better overall verse.return the fav when i get battles up.