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[.:D:.] 09-12-04 01:02 PM

This was feedback posted for The Kid P-Dizzle
 
just checkin out the polls....cant vote..

good job tho dizzle

Nynth Degree 09-12-04 07:27 PM

Aight folks, let's get some more votes here, uppin'...

TURBAN 09-12-04 07:39 PM

lol trooper why do you keep deisqualify'n da fuck'n votes , are you scared or something?, when you got cats like wildfire vot'n then u know he got it locked, dont worry i'd be scared to

In-Vision 09-12-04 10:58 PM

no offense to you paramik...but how is paramiks vote considred "adaquate feedback" it's no better than the other two votes the kid got....stop gettin votes dq'd....it's not about the record man...

Nynth Degree 09-13-04 07:40 AM

Aight, 2-2 now, still lookin' for more, uppin' ...

Nynth Degree 09-13-04 04:33 PM

Yo, uppin' this shit again folks, don't be shy....

N.Tavarez 09-13-04 05:51 PM

This was feedback posted for Trooper
 
u fuckin suck trooper no wonder u barely on this site u wack@!

remember we was on the same crew and u try to play me when i was 3-5??? i told u then you was ass and u still is nigga
lookin like 50 cent crippled cousin in ya pics say something elite general....i dont forget.

let me know.....

~Lady Fiya~ 09-13-04 07:48 PM

This was feedback posted for Trooper
 
supportin' my nigga Trooper, uppin' this battle.. nice drop Trooper, good luck 2 both..
~L F~

Recluse 09-13-04 08:23 PM

Voted For: Trooper

this was one sided...trooper took this in all topics....and he wasn't trying....good battle but kid....elevate...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Logic The Goonie 09-13-04 08:28 PM

no trig u need to hop off troops dick....:thumbup:

Recluse 09-13-04 08:35 PM

ain't nobody on anyones dick....i felt he came harder...just like you think kid one...

Logic The Goonie 09-13-04 08:44 PM

Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions
ummm thats unbeliveably weak, he always uses those weak little sickness similes...
You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's
this is the weakst line ever.....doesnt even truly make sense
Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech
taking away yur speech!? by takin out tonsils? extra weak....
Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals
ehh this was coo but still pretty damn weak

that was weak. if trooper keeps spittin like that, hes gunna get continually owned...

Nynth Degree 09-13-04 11:47 PM

Aight, still lookin' for more votes, damnn folks...

Nynth Degree 09-14-04 07:35 PM

Still uppin' for votes, let's close this one down, eh?

G Deuce 09-14-04 07:57 PM

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Ight this is how I see it......

KPD:
I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets
Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz...
8/10 - Nice intro, usage of metas and similes

I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...
7/10 - Could have been better, wording was off

This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude
Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food...
7/10 - Very weak punch, wording was off

Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines
I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime...
9/10 - Good comeback from last line, nice closer
total: 31

Trooper:
Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions
8/10 - Solid intro and opener

You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's
7/10 - Average punchline, not hard hitting

Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech
7/10 - Average again because of lack of hard punchline

Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals
8/10 Very solid and great closer
Total:30

Conclusion:
Both were ok drops, KPD had inconsistancy in his delieverance and Trooper's sentences set up for a great punchline, but lacked the deliver. My vote goes to KPD.


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