This was feedback posted for 20 GraND
 

so i hope u remeber me man//
twin revolvers like yo sammity sam//

THEM 2 LINES IS 4RM CASSIDY FREESTYLE HAHA FUCKIN CHEATER STOP BITIN N MAKE YA OWN SHIT UP

Voted For: Unrealghost

wasn't feelin this battle sorry..

both of you try to work on your metaphores and similes, then that will help your punches hit stronger..

also look for name plays, because those can help you some too..

punches- unreal
personals- none.
werdplay- none..
flow- unreal
multis- unreal.

bro, its a freestyle, u dont have time to think and work....
u just spit it out..
if it was a pre-written battle, then i could find out where he lives and talk shit about dat or w/e.. but its a FREESTYLE....
most cats on here pre-write shit, i know it cuz half of dem told me....

Voted For: Unrealghost

lol this was a good battle on this side for Unreaighost he took it to you it was one (onesided battle) takes it with better punches then the othe rguy and better vocab:
vocab:Un
Punches:Un
Opener:Un
Cloener:un
metas: 3/10 Un 0/10 for other cat
multi's Un
v/ Unrealgihost
return the favour in anyone of my battles in my sig thanks peace

Voted For: Unrealghost

unreal you took it ,

you had all around better punches, the flow was alittle off but u could both use a lot more work, but i enjoyed reading it

punches//ug
personals//none
meta's//sorta ug
structure//ug

20 grand your was alright jus work on your structure and your flow a little more

vote// unrealghost

this battle was a quick one so drop a vote

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