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HoPe 09-23-04 02:06 AM

Voted For: Phantom

lmao....phantom..next time find better competition please...

phantom:
if you think about it, no legends are still alive...
you just known as being gods biggest waste of life...

very good line ^

lol..

livin legend: please actually use some punches against him..urs may be longer..but he still killed you with the creative punchse he had....

vote: phantom

punch: phan
flow:phan
spit:phan
creativitie:phan

Logic The Goonie 09-26-04 01:56 PM

yay, almost done! somebody finish this off please.

50Cal. 09-26-04 07:04 PM

Voted For: Livin Legend

ok living legend 50 lines of bullshit only one real good punchline was the bars on a bike shit the rest aint hit but they were ok they were weak personals also lacked and structure and flow was off ok wordplay and good vocab punches helped but couldve been much better 5/10
phantom whack fucking opener ok second line 3rd bar was blah 4th bar good diss 5th was ok blah again whacked ender no good disses or punches here this was a ultimate slack on your part whackest shit i ever saw from you vocab ok structure ok a 3/10
basically i thought phantom would merk him i was dead wrong this was a fucking whacked battle

Terumoto 09-27-04 01:01 AM

Voted For: Phantom

phantom: you had some MADD punchlines...

yeah you runnnin shit, and you takin it pretty far...
was gunna drop some personals, but nobody knows who you are...

^that one had me laughin.

nothin wrong with ya structure or flow... good wordplay.. it was a nice verse all round..

Livin legend: WTF structure???!! every 3rd line was stretched... and those explinations were so.. everywhere.. na'mean?? ya verse was ok i guess.. very forced wordplay.. and why u usin hyphens... ya got no multis.. flow was kinda stretched


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