Voted For: NoMercy
trojans verse was pretty nice i felt most of ya punchlines except for the waterbed.....i know theres more behind it i just didnt feel it. wordplay was nice ye vocab just good, overall pretty tight verse especially the way u finished it off. no mercy verse i didnt really feel at all.....nothin hit it for me just very plain and boring.....i see ur structure was alright and ya vocab was alright but man all i can say is 'elevate'. u coulda done sumthin with him naming himself after a condom brand tho....good idea. Vote Switched |
sorry i fuct u........will fix that mistake i meant to vote for trojan....give me a sec
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This was feedback posted for Trojan
i think trojan got this battle with better punches flow and personals no mercy ad an ight verse but i felt it wasnt hard enuf
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lol.......^^^could av voted g......uppin this..........
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well its true trojan is a condom brand lol
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lol.........uppin...................
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upppppppppiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn this shit yalllllll..........
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Voted For: Trojan
this is the second battle of yours i have read and i am liking what i am seein , you new name should be one sided haha nice drop punche's// trojan personals//trojan flow//trojan metaphors//trojan thats all i an think of right now so vote//trojan Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Trojan
yo this is how i saw it....... punches: trojan.....8/10..... nm 5/10 personals: no mercy 6/10.... trojan 3/10 multis none metas: trojan....8/10....nm..6/10 flow...trojan....9/10.....nm 4/10 no mercy ur flow was off...........and barley rhymed trojan ur punches connected....and i like ur metaphores v/ trojan.................. good battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
lmao.........wot the fuck......enygmas vote was easily explained.......haha....bullshit man.....u shud be banned for avin ur scam wit certified thug........biatch...lost ma respect nah........uppin this.......
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holy man certifeidthug is a goof anyway i dont scam he just did it swear i usto do it lots he pmed me after and told me to vote for him on a battle after so i did plus theres money when you vote and trojan you did win but i saw 1 unexplained by someone else i forgot who but its gone now and i guess they seen more hmm:) o well
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Voted For: Trojan
trojan u won dis shit it was close but u won bcuz of vocab and u tore him wit ya punches good shit u can do better tho nomercy u were ok ya flow was better but where were the punches and metas u need to come harder if u wouldve u wouldve won no hate keep at it vote= trojan ~peace~ |
nomercy pissed cuz he loosin lmao
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^no im not im good now but do you even no what metas are cuz all my lines were metas and flow i didnt have any of them you realy think yer good then battle me if you kno metas haha and if i was you i would be afraid to show my record:laugh:
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Voted For: NoMercy
Im given my man some credit for his age but trojan it was a lil hard to read yer shit same with NoMercy the stucture is so complex its hard to understand both of you had streched yer like the same rappers lol:) punches: trojan vocab: No wordplay: trojan metas: No multi's: jsut by a bit No opener: No nice wordplay to closener: No the idea with condom unblieveble:) flow: no need for this in text vote and jsut a bit better: NoMercy loved it:) |
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