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Aight Yall Need To Vote On Dis Battle


Yo 109 Peepz View Dis Thread And No One Battle Come On Yo Vote

I Mean No One Votes

VOTE or DIE ppl...
lol
COME ON

Voted For: Street poet

I got arrows that will hit you in different directions//
Artillary shed smaller than your N Sync poster collection//
^^no punch but good flow
The last thing ull hear is the fuckn trigger click//
Ironic.. uve been beatin in the day with a night stick//
^^this was koo
Ill take an egg beater and shove it into your chest//
Then youll know the true meaning of beatn to death//
^^nice..lol
This aint a battle its and abortion, cuz im killing this kid//
Your lame ass rhymes you need to "get-rid"//
^^flow fell off
This freestyle is soo good, it should be made into a song//
You wish u were a "vet", so you could take care of ur mom//
(^^^ooooOOOOoo^^^)
^^ok,but keep on topic its a battle between you n him not his mom...lol...


Yall Katz Iz Garbage Ya Level is Way Belo Mine Ur Wacknes Is Undefined-
Spit Dat Sizzlin' Shit.. Hotter then da Devil N the Sun Combined-
^^nice flow but no hard punch..
Kids Gettin Raped Quick Like Michael Jackson at a 7 year olds BurfDay-
Droppin Missiles Spit Big Lines..Look Like Fuckin Eearthquakes-
^^??.good flow but did'nt really make sense??
Get Tackled And "Caught On Ya Own Side" LIke A Touchback-
U Rushin In My Yard like dat meat comercial U Quick To Get Rushed Back-
^^iffy rhymin/back n back?.shouldnt rhyme the same word.
Playin Against Da Kid You'll Get Shook Quick Like Dem And 1 Niggaz-
Typa Ma fucka To GetUp In Ya Grill Slap U An Ask You Now What Nigga!?
^^ok.same as the line before..
Mayn You Wack Ya Raps Are Real Dirty Like A Gas Station Basket-
Im Like VampiresYou Cant Kil me I jus Keep Resurectin From My Cascatte-
^^ok
Click Of A Button n Ull Get Shut Down Nigga cheerin like I gota Tuchdown-
*POP POP* What Now!?! Kids in jail gettin raped up the butt now-hha its like dat
^^ok closer

aight this was an ok battle but you both lacked in hard hitting punches n should work on that,both had good flow but 20 grand yours fell off at points,overall pretty close...but i gave it to street poet...for a couple slightly better punches n content in verse.

This was feedback posted for Street poet
 

so poets can rap

punches- street
personals- neither
multis- street
multas- street
flow- street
word play- street

Street nice drop. flow wuz on, punches hit hard, but no personals.

20 not bad verse just not as good as streets. just keep elevatin. also keep the flow goin, u fell off a few times.

Street:
''Yall Katz Iz Garbage Ya Level is Way Belo Mine Ur Wacknes Is Undefined-
Spit Dat Sizzlin' Shit.. Hotter then da Devil N the Sun Combined-" nice punch. keep em comin

20:
"I got arrows that will hit you in different directions//
Artillary shed smaller than your N Sync poster collection//" funny and decent punch.

v/street if i could vote

Voted For: Street poet

yo post got this you had beter punches and better flow 8/10 on punches and flow nice word useage i liked it all you kept it real and didnt need to battle this rookie newb
grand- work on your word useage the rhymes were all typical and played out think of shit dont just type what first comes to mouth aight dawg work on you structure and punces over all 3/10 no hate tho man i realize ur just learnin so its understandable just try to pick some other newbs ya know ones you can handle....sike na you lear when you get on good ppl but then they shit on your text so just get newb's till you work on ur shit

i meant poet not post my bad man

oppps my bad grand u not a newb i glanced at the adio record and i thought it was ur text but i still meant all i posted

yo uppin uppin mayne uppin peepz vote or die damn it~!

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Voted For: 20 GraND

not the best ive seen from 20 grand but he came a little harder then street poet and street poet im aloud to vote like this so dont get mad and im voting honest man so ya 20 grand you had some wordplay not realy to much but this is what i found out in this battle check it out:
punches: 20
vocab: 20
wordplay: poet
metas: 20
multi's: poet
stucture: poet
flow: 20
opener: 20
closener: 20
basically 20 took this one:) heres my vote and its for 20 grand:)
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Voted For: 20 GraND

YOU GOT THIS ONE BECAUSE YOU HAD BETTER PUNCHES & PERSONALS V/T 20 Grand