This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
 

one sided battle

Punches- G
Flow- G
Multis- G
Multas- G
Personals- G
Wordplay- G

G nice verse. hard, connectin punches, pretty much good all round.

yung too elementary compared to G. not hard punches, no personals, and u need to use wut u get, not go min.

G:
"i leave niggaz feelin jiggie, rippin tha stage like i was biggie//
u shudnt test me mothafucka, its like touchin a blak mans radio, its stupid, jus ask chris tucker//" nice closer.

yung:

yo i step up to da stage start to spilt my dope stuff//
he spilts his wack rhymes they so wack it makes him look lyk a puff//" eh ok punch. best i found

v/G if i could vote

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Voted For: Elusiv G

Elusiv G-punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

yungster-yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

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Voted For: Elusiv G

G took this win he came harder with punches and vocab his structure was better and he has some QP so overall G got this one no hate yall just bein real

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Voted For: Elusiv G

elusiv G Koed this muh fucka heres wha tim gonna take on this battle elusiv won by lotsa liek the other guy didnt have a chance elusiv took this shit on every thing:D
punches: G
vocab: G
metas: G
multi's: G
opner: G
closener: G
stucture: needs work G
vote: elusiv G