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Ill-Grammatix 09-15-04 09:29 AM

hol up... we got a pending battle against PSA... i don't wanna see none of that hate shyt!

Dirty Nigga 09-15-04 10:30 AM

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

oooooooh shit!

this battle was niiiice ya'll, real nice...

ya both really hit hard, exceptional personals n punches from both emcees in this one..

ILL, ya flow was right on point, ya personals n punches connected an hit as u planned them too, real good job, u got my vote cause of the humouress lines n the killer finisher u dropped.....damn good drop my nigguh

DV8 ya flow was siiiiick, loved this bar...
ya drops are neglected, you ILL? .......nah ya shits not even close to being infected,
ya got a false sense of being respected, here ill fix ya verse *DELETE*..!!now its perfected,
^^^^
dope as fuuuuuuuuuck man

but the rest of ya verse lacked the humour that ILL dropped, ya both prety damn equal on structure, punches n personals, u took the metaphore side of the battle, but ILL had some humour n connected his personals n punches pretty damn good...

ya'll should throw ya hat off to each other cause this was one close, tight, kickass battle, keep em comin ya'll...

p e a c e

DV8 09-15-04 12:10 PM

hmmm,i don't see how you be votin on humour as the determining factor,?
a verse doesnt have to be humourous to be hard hitting...!!,not a very well explained vote,n ill-g im not jus sayin that cause he did'nt vote 4 me...lol...

DV8 09-16-04 03:25 AM

uppin 4 honest votes......................................

DV8 09-16-04 11:10 PM

uppin 4 votes people....................................

DV8 09-17-04 08:17 AM

uppin............................................. .......

Nynth Degree 09-17-04 09:21 AM

This was feedback posted for DV8
 
Yo, I can't vote on this oe, just checkin' the count...

Logic The Goonie 09-17-04 10:35 AM

Voted For: DV8

OMG!!!!!! DOPE ASS BATTLE!

BREAKDOWN!!!\/ \/

it was a real close battle. ill was leading in the flow category but DV8 was leading in the complexity category, and other than that, it was a tie. the thing i used to decide a winner was how many great (not good) punches you had. ill had 3 great punches that actually made me laugh (bars 2, 4 and closer)
and DV8 had 4 that made me laugh (bars 1,3,4 and 6) so DV8 takes the win. i gotta say, ill try to be more creative with ya punches, those are almost all semi-played. DV8, we already had a convo on the length of bars so u still need to shorten that up. good damn battle both of yall. RTF....links in the sig. :thumbup:

Mad Dog 09-18-04 03:31 AM

Voted For: DV8

DAyum...thas all i gotta say to this...both came real hard in this...some real ocmplexity in the rhymes in here both had good usage of multies punches galore...structure i'd give Ill Grammatix because it was more clean in my opinion but the flow on both accounts was easily readable...Ill @ times u self-G'd urself

"Ya intermedi-ate skills ain't good enough for drops I.G. create"

Like that try and avoid that...

DV8 got this purely because he used more personals and though some say links are played...i kinda like them...and D used this to good effect which in my own opinion won this battle but both verses were nice

RTF on ma sig \/

The Jett 09-18-04 07:08 PM

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

I think was pretty easy....
Dv8
You had sum nice vocab. But that was about it. The rest was hella stretched an mostly metiphores. You had personals. But the pretty lil Link design killed it. I hate explanations. I can figure shit out for myself. Overall, you seem'd to focus more on your vocabulay an smartness...with flow and multi's...rather than the all important basic insulting of your opponent. It was pretty. But that was about it. Pretty soft for a battle. Do topicals or summin.
Ill-Grammatix
Good flow. Basic to the point, punching with heavy personals. It's what a battle is all about. You forced this. And take the easy victory for it in my eyes. You also had moments of nice vocab and colorfull metiphores witch add'd to your verse in the end.

return with an honest vote here.
DV8 u said you would. So I expect your honest vote as well. another words.....

Dont be like everyone else and not return with an honest vote. Because I did not vote for you. ;)
here. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=150258
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Parallel 09-19-04 03:46 PM

This was feedback posted for DV8
 
fuckin rank ass shit! dv8's got this:)

Ill-Grammatix 09-20-04 05:10 PM

2-2... good battle... seems pretty close so far.... keep them votes coming... by the way, I'm still on vacation and gotta wait hella long for a comp in this library...lol... things will be back to normal by like the 6th 0r 7th of October.

DV8 09-20-04 05:10 PM

aight ill-grammatix ive been hit with 2 fuckin hate votes in this stinkin battle, i aint to bitter but i think your crew is already disolved considering manipulation has tried out 4 A.I...props on being the only 1 in your FUCKIN crew that gave a shit about the crew battle.../............uppin 4 more votes...!

DV8 09-21-04 08:27 AM

uppin............................................. .....

Terumoto 09-22-04 12:57 AM

This was feedback posted for DV8
 
woord... dv8 way better on the multis than our battle.. ya shit made sense!! and you got some nice punches in there... was gettin a bit forced by the end though... but a good verse - multi-wise... not all of em were perfectly syllable matched though..

sup IG... nice verse :thumbup: ,, funny shit.. lmao


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