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Voted For: Quick Witted

aight quick witted got this hands down,structure n flow was iffy but you had punches unlike the other verse,personals were ok,lol.you wrote alot more than was needed but thats koo,young buckshot your only bar that could be considered a punch was your opener n it was weak ..elevate on ya punches n complexity...
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