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Voted For: Phantom

Creat...
Phantoms physical matrix doesn’t exist, all that’s left is whack lyrics`
Verbal warfare penetrates ur soul; dis text god jus left u with a holy spirit`
bunch of big words. All out of context.
Kid you brought death to your self…I just handed you the knife`
Changed his name, he was big till he found out he was smaller than life `
personal. but weak an bleek at that.
Damn kid lost your last couple of battles, just went on a loosing rally`
Mr. big C you the reason why kids are embarrassed to represent killa kali`
personal's. again. nuttin good tho.
Kid just like the crew your representing you no longer exist`
Living up to your name, this phantom just got lost in the mist`
good personal 1st line....2nd good metiphore as well. nice closer

Phantom
when it all plays out, the true Master had got this battle on Lock...
dude writes "creative" punches away from home, to think "outside the box"...
Lol at the wordplay. I liked that alot. his home...the box..lmao
really in the end you battlin me is truly a lost cause...
put ur verse up to a mirror so you can reflect on ya loss...
Seen this before. Not bit....jus played as hell
imma have you singin sad songs, like you the bitch from the color purple...
if you run everything "around" me, why you aint in the winners "circle"?...
didn't like the meti4 or wordplay here at all.
if you're smart nigga, realize ur name actually has a "y" at the end...
be smart now, look at how wack your verse is, AND DONT PUSH "SEND"!...
Ok personal 1st line...lil used..the whole send line
another smart move is to act like you never called out my intelligence...
or it will be a chinese meat shop, when we merk you "delicates"...
Not feelin the closer. get it but not to my liking

overall
Well it was OK for both. Neither had much other than one good line. Everything else was pretty Bland.

Ima go wit phantom tho.
His Opener was much better than Creativitie's closer. and those were the 2 best bar's in the battle.

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go Phantom...woop woop

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when it all plays out, the true Master had got this battle on Lock...
dude writes "creative" punches away from home, to think "outside the box"...


that was fuckin funny...

Voted For: creaTivitie

Phantom...I seen u drop so much harder, this was not up to par..opener was weak,l winner circle line was decent, closer was ok but nothing really hard was posted, your flow was tight an strucutre was tight. you lacked personals an multies, man u gotta take break from battling cuz u are much betta than this.

Creat: your personals hit pretty hard, ya opener was weak but following bar was harsh, good personal...your flow was on point an structure was good, no multies but that personal was hard enuff to take this battle, so u get it by a hair.

Jus my honest opinion, phantom u gotta go back to dropping like I know u can.

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really in the end you battlin me is truly a lost cause...
put ur verse up to a mirror so you can reflect on ya loss...
^nice, phantom.... lol

reppin' the crew nice drop both, up!!!!!!

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Voted For: Phantom

ok~
d.j em~ya verse was good,good flow up until you came towards the ending, it kinda fell off(the mr. big c line on didnt flow too well) cus you added too many syllables, but you had good personals and nice structure.........
phantom~your verse was great, you had very creative vocab and punches, they hit hard here,and well written too, your opener was ill,nice personal on the name, ya opening lines set the flow nicely, and ya verse grew stronger towards the end to close this with a dope line(delicates), that was nice wordplay,,
phantom took this with his vocab and creativity,as well as punches........nice job both