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Infamuz 09-16-04 07:59 AM

uppin for votes

~IiL PrOpHeT~ 09-16-04 08:09 AM

Voted For: Infamuz

theres nothing in this verse worth comparing to projectx/
this niggas flaws are too much for just one sentence/
^^^^^^^^^ o nice punch nice opener

no chance even in hell this bitch gots to beat me/
look nigga pay up becuz there is a defeat fee/(we bet on this)
^^^^^^^^^ lol nigga pay up motherfucker ha ha nice punch

if this battle is worth ya pride and honor, loot in this sitution/
just dont post up if aint redy to ride some fucking anilation/
^^^^^^^^^^ nice punch mayne nice

the only way youll get a win under ya self is versin illusion?(wack rapper)
get ya glow in the dark self battle a pussywhat u doing/ (hes white)
^^^^^^^^^^ good punch

look all i need is 5 bars to battle this bitch/
especiall 1 that will be found in 3 months inside a ditch/
^^^^^^^^^ ehhhhh not an good closa though but nice verse

1 titty 2 titty 3 titty 4 how many tittys can you fit tru a door how you gon say you not fat when you and ya mom got a hunch back yo name is brent flores
^^^^^^^^^^^^ hmmmmmm not good

and you a f at nigga w/o a brain you think you got game but your insaneyall be in pain
when i spit the flame you aint gonna be the same after they HEAR your name / OK NOT AN GOOD PUNCH MAYNE

my 22 will make you heart soft aas fuck that i grab the sawoff and tear everything off youd expired bitch jkust go head and retire it over
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD CLOSA AT ALL DA WHOLE VERSE DIDNT HAVE ANY PUNCHES NOR FLOWZ

MY VOTE GOES TO INFAMUZ FOR BETTA PUNCHES AND FLOW

Epical 09-16-04 07:50 PM

This was feedback posted for Infamuz
 
sad battle

punches- famuz
personals- famuz
multis- project (cuz he tried)
multas- neither
flow- famuz
word play- famuz

Famuz nice verse but you didnt have a great closer. gotta end it right.

Project u had multis which is good, but notin else. get some personals, and work on your structure its hard to read yours. it doesnt effect the rhyme, but i dont have time to have to read hard to get the flow right.

Famuz:
"if this battle is worth ya pride and honor, loot in this sitution/
just dont post up if aint redy to ride some fucking anilation/" nice punch. keep it up

Project:
"1 titty 2 titty 3 titty 4 how many tittys can you fit tru a door" lmao that is hilarious. not cuz it wuz good, exact opposite.

v/famuz if i could vote

Compose 09-16-04 08:02 PM

Voted For: Infamuz

infamuz took this easily, he bascially beat projectx in flow,vocab,creativity,personals and punches all together...projectx had more multies but they werent good ones


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