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j_da_monsta 09-14-04 01:58 PM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Aiight Shottaboy had this one locked.

It was a good battle but he won hands down.


Best Line - Lemme Proceed To The ''Starter''... (Opener)
Lyrically Stomp The Shit Out You In Ya Own ''S.Dot Carters''..


LMAO.....wow.


Opener- Shottaboy
Punches- Jay-Z (that Pun line was pretty funny.)
Multi- Shottaboy
Structure-Shottaboy
Closer- Shottaboy

Final Vote- Shottaboy

This battle was aiight, but it wasn't the best thing.

Jay-Z, you better elevate alot, if you don't then your just being a disgrace to the name.

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~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ 09-14-04 03:48 PM

This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
 
yo u should take this all his punches arte played and his last line is an audio line ive herd it b4 this herb biting again....how old is wrap/rap presents line lmao....jay z im calling u out set it up bitch

Dirty Nigga 09-14-04 05:19 PM

Upppin Ya'll...!!!

Dirty Nigga 09-15-04 08:16 AM

Upin

the_crazy_one 09-15-04 09:47 AM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

close close close but short got diss with his evil merkin-ness like he always has had

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distilled 09-15-04 12:24 PM

Voted For: Jay-Z

Jay-Z took this, was actually close tho.

Shottaboy, you actually came well here, but JAy-Z's verse was better structured and his punches hit harder.

My vote, you know

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mc-bad-boy 09-15-04 03:31 PM

This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
 
nice battle vote 4 shotta bcoz-
better punches
better met
better mul
beter verse all together
v/shotta

mc-bad-boy 09-15-04 03:32 PM

phew it came as feedbck i nearly put a vote bcoz i 4got bout crew

~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ 09-15-04 03:37 PM

yo jay-z its tru ur a bitch stop hatin....
(no one could of thought of that line) unless it was just taken.....
so shut up u got caught bitin again and dont talk shit b/c u think ur good b/c u bite from unknown people that are better than u.....

DV8 09-15-04 04:23 PM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

shotta had some betta punches overall,jayz did aight but his punches werent connectin,but did have better structure n flow....punches win battles n shotta jus barely came out on top with punches...shotta if your gonna write bars with 3 lines in them i suggest you try multi's only because it through your flow off way to much but i discounted it cause your punches were a lil better.....

oh n shotta when you vote leave links so peeps don't havta look 4 ya battles,n you shouldnt give an overall vote determined on humour,like i said its punches n personals that win battles,not bitter....its aight....

Dirty Nigga 09-16-04 06:44 AM

Upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

creative 09-16-04 08:27 AM

SHUT THE FUCK UP U DICKRIDER YOUR IN HISS CREW VOTING? IMA Have yo ass BANNED

Dirty Nigga 09-16-04 10:24 AM

He Didnt Vote You Fuckin Idiot, He Posted FEEDBACK, Your A Fuckin Spastic....

You Really Have No Reazon To Be On This Site, I Suggest You Fuck The Hell Off......

ITS CALLED FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDBAAAACK
F E E D B A C K

He Didnt Fuckin Vote, You Fuckin Stupid Bastard

Jesus Christ, HOW DUMB ARE YOU

Want Me Too Explain One More Time?

IT IS CALLED FEEDBACK, NOT A VOTE......FEED.....BACK, Okay?

Understand Me You Faggot?
Jesus Christ...............................

Upppin 4 Votes

Compose 09-16-04 10:32 AM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

flow-shottaboy took it the syllabels and lines matched better

punches-shottaboy,better punches then jay only one he had was the "wrap better then me...christmas eve" line, the simpsons one i wasnt feelin at all

personals-shottaboy, goin against soemone who has his name jay-z should be good for personals and he won this with the s.dot carters,dick suckin lips

multies-none,both were lacking this couldnt make a fair decision

vocab-shottaboy, even though both didnt have spectacular vocab, shottboy took it he just had better words

originality/creativity-jay-z, even though that "fattboy over here just ate him" is really played i still gave it to jay-z, with the christmas eve,simpsons,etc. it was more creative then shottaboys faggot,saggot,maggot lines

overall i vote shottaboy he had more and done better elements

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