yea you can but .....only after you rtf! :thumbup:

upping this battle

Voted For: D. Cepth Shun

yo won this on shun
opener:shun
personals:neither
structure:tie
punches:shun

drop honest votes here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148857

uppin cmon HONEST votes

Voted For: D. Cepth Shun

D.Cepth
ya verse was good nice wordplay ok
punches but ur flow was tyght overall
good verse


Upfront
u were selfglorifyin in ya verse a lil 2 much
stay disses and add more wordplay metas vocab
n personals 2 ya verse u coulda won
good battle overall

vote honestly on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

Voted For: D. Cepth Shun

Aight

shun got this...
both verse came kinda basic, not much creativity from either emcee, but shuns personals n metas connected n hit alot harder than ya oppenent..

upfront, ya rhyme scheme was too basic, ya need'a elevate n try usin punchlines, punches wins battles n i didnt see one punch in ya flow, no offence just try experimenting with humour n punches...

return the fave in my sig

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