uppin this again for some votes please

uppin this for votes and votes just 3 more and ill win so VOTEEEEEEEE

uppin for votes still...................................

Voted For: the_crazy_one

crazy-one took this because his flow n structure were readable....nah but realy the other kids structure made it impossible for that shit to flow.......punches also go to crazy so yeh ya git this...

v/crazy

hit this up wiv an honest vote plz...prem vs intellekt...
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dat's coo uppin for votes still...................

Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

Alright, neither of these verses were very good, but Youngstah's verse just stood out. Crazy One's flow was horrible and his punches didn't hit very hard at all. Work on the personals and elevate. Stay Up.

aight thanks dawg i owe ya still uppin 4 votes.....

This was feedback posted for the_crazy_one
 

im the crazy one im under an alias

Voted For: the_crazy_one

aiight good battle both yall but tha crazy one got my vote cuzz he came harder with tha punches and his structure was wayy better and his vocab was aiight nice lines

Lil Young
aiight good verse mayn but tha "//" gotta go it makes it look sloppy for really mayn and basic rhymes in ya flow try uppin on yo vocab

P.S drop some honest votes on my battles peace
one(one)

Voted For: the_crazy_one

You CaLL YoUrSelF The_Crazy_One, I Call My Self Lil-Youngsta// I'll Show u Who's da True Spitta & True Gangsta// I Neva Play Around Though i'm SixTeen// CaMe To ya From da UnderGround & NOw da Big Screen//
But Now i GoT da Feelin, Dat I Got da Flow// I'ts Lil-Youngstah who RuNNin da GaMe Don't ya Know// I'm Puttin this Bitch in His Place, I Also Got this Bitch on Check// Betta Watch it From da Back Or i'll Be Brakin yo Neck// Now I've been Hopin & Lookin For Something Different// Now i'm GoNNa Give it 2 u Slick & Wicked...
2 Slide It's Lil-Youngstah CoMiN 2 ya From da SouthSide// I'll Be "Bustin" Caps, So u Betta be Prepared to DiE// A Slow & PainFull Death... Cause yo BoDy Will Be CatChiNG HoT LeaD// WiTh 1 Or 2 BullEts In Ya BoDy or Ya Head You'll Be Dead// I Don't Want This Shit to Become Like 50 Cent's "DraMasTiC"
TraGeDy// I'ts Lil-Youngstah Who Comin With da True & Wicked Stragedy
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ BAD STRUTURE,,,,,,NO FLOW,,,,,,,,I READ IT BUT "OK" PUNCHES BUT NO FLOW NO PERSONALS


is the_crazy_one beat?....
You gotta better chance at owning 2 left feet...
For christ's sake! I mean your from compton but you aint no clover!*...
cause clovers got luck**...
now Just drop you head, point an click the X button...
You with this win is like Ray Charles puttin...
and i can tell you it aint gonna happen...
Your a gluten for punishment, an I'm dropin moderate...
ya verse called me up, an asked if i can Father it!!...
how did you really end up rapping?...
cause this battle with i wasnt even breakin a gland...
Wait..you want a vote?...
Youd have a better chance of bein talaban with a cingular plan...
like I said i aint even breakin a gland...
youngstar..u remind me of that kid Deluxe...
da only Difference he's makin money while u sit here and suck
^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT AIGHT GOOD STRUTURE AND GOOD FLOW NICE PUNCHES AND GOOD PERSONALS

V-THA_CRAZY_ONE NICE PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW AND GOOD PERSONALS AND GOOD PUNCES AND NICE WORDPLAYS

LIL YOUNG-"OK" VERSE NO FLOW NO STRUTURE "OK" PUNCHES NO PERSONALS ELEVATE USIN STRUTURE THATS WHY I VOTED FOR THA CRAZY ONE BASICALLY HE HAD BETTA VERSE DAN U,,,,,,,PUNCHES,,,,,,,,,WORDPLAYS,,,,,,AND FLOW

~PEACE~!