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Artemis 09-17-04 09:21 PM

up[.....

Darth Vader 09-17-04 11:30 PM

lol, why do you wanna start beef, look man, that stuff I post can help you elevate, uppin this

Artemis 09-18-04 12:13 AM

man, TRUST Me, I Do NOT need yo help on this. You'll find out in two weeks why :thumbup: But anyways, i don't care much about this text shit really. So I us put like 10-15 mins. But yea, whatever. up...

~Lady Fiya~ 09-18-04 12:35 AM

This was feedback posted for lyrical madness
 
u used my name in ur verse! nice, supportin' the fam, two nice verses.. good luck you two..
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Triple_N 09-18-04 12:42 AM

Voted For: Fiya Spitter

Breakdown for madness:

Bit his name off Lady Fiya, you disgrace a good name//
Nottin mo then a 'bitch', i'll leave you out in the rain//

Weak opener...4/10

Imitate the guy in headgames sig, strangle yo ass wit a piano wire//
Didnt know wack was 'hot' these days, guess thats how u Fire//

Blah...3/10

I'll fite 'Fiya' wit fire, merk this name bighter//
You may spit fire, but i'm a fire fighter//

What?...weak...3/10

You wack noobs on R.V., ya you are all the same, another rook who spits lame//
Pour gasoline down your throught ignite it wit a lighter so you can mimic yo name//

Best line but still weak 4/10
Overall: 14/50

Breakdown for fiya

nobody liked yo alias, so yo old name you went and got rid
Cuz you got more fuckin' "bitch-slaps", than the wife of Jason Kidd

Filler shoud not have been opener...4/10

You have a "lyrical" in yo name, but yo lyrics only bring sadness
From all the fiya I'll spit, you're gonna lose, and feel the madness

Decent attempt at name flip but still wack...5/10

You got an ugly face.... DAMN, It's an ugly mug, dude!!!
Yo face is like Jackos nose, man, it's all chewed

Weak...3/10

Yea, that shit is tru, as well as how much you suck
Cuz to you the definition of pussy's a man's butt

Hell NO!!!!2/10

The "perfection" in my verse, is like a "Stepford House Wife"
You beatin' me is kinda like ghandi winnin' a fist fight
Finally a decent line...6/10

Overall: 20/50

Weak battle overall...fiya got it wit his closer cuz dats the only line in whole battle.

Vote: Fiya

Mc_BaD_bOy 09-18-04 06:42 AM

Voted For: Fiya Spitter

nice fiya wins this
nice n better punches
better pers
i lyked there verse ncie battle
fiya wins
pz out
return da fav on my battle in my sig


battle closed


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