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This was feedback posted for Lyriclesolja
weak battle
punches- solja personals- solja multis- eve metas- eve word play- eve flow- solja Solja ok verse. work on your vocab and harder punches. work on the structure cuz lotta people judge on that. Eve way to elementary. punchers were weak, u had multis, and better metas but thats it. one word: elevate Solja: "Yo your styles like a mold and im the disinfectant, i saw that battle between you and young buck you got neglected," good personal. Eve: "solja you still suck on my worst day i could shove scrable pieces up ya ass and u still couldn't fuck with my word play//" good idea, bad wordin. v/solja if i could vote |
Voted For: eveO
breakdown punches: L personals: none <---- hate battles without personals flow: eve mettas: tie multies: eve (kinda) vote....... lya face will get smashed ya ribs will get cracked thats all the shit i did with a bat and i will stay sonning solja like fathers with kids in Iraq// ^^ best line in both spits Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Lyriclesolja
aight both lacked personals n GOOD wordplay i gotta give it to solja though cause he had structured punches(weak but they were there)the other verse was in desperate need of some structure nbetter flow ..work on that n you'll deffinately get some wqins but your verse lacked in this battle... return the favour.. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149670 |
yall on some shit what kinda shit is this and yall said i was elementary due raps with one word at the end of his rhyme wut kinda shit is this yall still on some dick ryden shit lyrical stop PMing niggas to vote for u
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Voted For: Lyriclesolja
Aiiight lyricle took this... eveO, ya flow was aight, i liked the kids in iraq line, the choll line wasnt too much, u could have used better wordplay, but not a bad drop, just keep elevatin (no hate) lyricle, i cqan see ya gettin better at every battle u have.. this was one of ya stronger battles, nice vocab n flow, punches didnt really hit, but ya personals n vocab have got u the vote return the favor p e a c e |
fuck naw iight i want every one that voted to break down were he was better then me in cause yall dickryde to much
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im not you cant take the fact that you gonna lose....i havent pm'd any body for votes...and the mods know it....so exept the loss i dont cheat EVER.....so take it like a man fuckin pussy.........Uppin.. |
Voted For: eveO
Yo your styles like a mold and im the disinfectant, i saw that battle between you and young buck you got neglected, ^^^^^^^^^^^ personals and punches finally newbies gettin da picture of personals and punches you slow ass is a yeast infection, and im the monistat one, your soft like Linda Ronstat wit a gun, you like Vanilla Ice's son, if he actually had one, ^^^^^^^^^ nice flow but no punches were throwin on dat part You had alot of time to prewrite check the bitch slap, after all that time you had to write you still gonna sound like crap, you a newbie at this shit start to take a note, that wack battle you did gave me more hope, ^^^^^^^^^ personal and a punch nice mayne keep at it homie you should have choked and left this battle alone, now your gonna get ko'd sittin at your comp. at home. ^^^^^^^^^ weak asssss closa keep elevating homie solja you still suck on my worst day i could shove scrable pieces up ya ass and u still couldn't fuck with my word play// ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ooooooooooooo what punch nice opener you can't write rhymes go rock and roll try stop the flow cause i stay on top of soul{sol} like Dr.Scholl's// ^^^^^^^^^^ nice punch homie keep it up ya face will get smashed ya ribs will get cracked thats all the shit i did with a bat and i will stay sonning solja like fathers with kids in Iraq// ^^^^^^^^^^^ punch nice face it ya wack at will i'll stomp ya you suck so much if u gave head for land your brian{intelligence} still whouldn't conquer// ^^^^^^^^^^ o aight nice closa mayne i gots to give dis to eveo got cuz of da hardcer punches mayne solja mayne u kept hitting dem personals and dem punches but at da middle u stumble a lil bit but u pick yo self up at da end but da closa was wack~! but solja keep elevating on dem personals and dem punches it will get u somewhere aight mayne keep it up v-eveo cause of punches (harder) |
Uppin..
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Voted For: eveO
Opener - Eveo, Sols was a weaker punch attempt Closer - Neither, both were weak Punches - Eveo, Sols weren't as hard Personals - Sol, Eveo didnt use any Metas - Neither, both were weak Multies - Neither used them Structure - eveo, sols was wack (short/long lines) Vocab - Sol, better vocab than eveo Flow - eveo, Sols was kinda sloppy Overall it was somewhat close but Eveo came out to win this one today and it shows above ^^^. Props to both, no hate, just an honest vote guys, peace... |
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Voted For: eveO
EVE0 won but fix ya damn structure ya lines was stretched 2 def wordplay was good had hittin punches and they were original so nice verse Solja keep workin on wordplay n punches ya disses was koo but i won't help wit out wordplay vocab metas n punches so ya verse was basic still alrite dough vote honestly on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle |
Uppin.............yo i should be winnin this shit what the fuck yall talkin bout i pretty much won this hands down....but what eva
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Uppin..
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Uppin..will return honest votes!!!
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