uppin for more........

once more, h to the oes

mocha chocolato hoe

you mother fuckers.

BLAAH

its pretty good fo a first topical. Some flow should be fixed up but its not that bad.

a very good peice.. finnaly i see a peice from you... very good shit.. nice imagret... match iight with the title some wasnt that god though but some lines wer reall dope nice and it would be good as a topical

feedback here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153440

uppination namsayin

Blah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dope for the lenght yo.,good imagery n feelin in this piece..
....should collab fam< ill get at ya bout it

must be a joke, shit has over 100 views but only 24 replies, which most of are mine.

namsayin, Feed would be appreciated.

once more.

and again

Some lines need a extra syllablles to fix flow............
but ova all nice drop

Thanks man.

Reppin UK.

*stretches arms*

wow this is sstill here??

I hat the open mic forum, we need a coffee shop to attract all the young kids these days........