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the_crazy_one 09-16-04 12:21 PM

Voted For: final

final that was great i loved it you merked him to the end of merking ness that was great for only taking 15 mins to do i mean it Great

Compose 09-16-04 04:17 PM

it was just ...ok... i just wrote it for like 5 minutes last night, should of put more work since my first battle but whatever....uppin for more votes

Epical 09-16-04 07:31 PM

This was feedback posted for Boy_wonder
 
average battle

punches- wonder
personals- neither
multis- wonder
multas- neither
word play- wonder
flow- final

Wonder u had some nice punches and punchlines, but u need more hard hittin and more of em.

Final liked ya flow, but your punches were weaker than wonders.

Wonder:
"i think imma go get tha new album buck dropped...
u so fukkin broke u cant even window shopp...." nice closer

Final:
"to this kid banks is the one to be admired/
he aint got enough skills for that role t be aquired/" nice opener.

v/Wonder if i could vote

intensify effect 09-16-04 08:47 PM

Voted For: final

this was tight...

flow: even
punches: even
diss: final

all around basicly it was final who had the better ending which helped me make my final answer but seriously ya are preety even and tie.......

nice battle

untouchablekilla 09-16-04 09:48 PM

Voted For: Boy_wonder

boy_wonder just came harder his flow and punches were better and had bettern punchlines final ur just a n00b who whould leave this site u suck ur structure sucks and ur verse was wack just plain wack

v/Boy_wonder

Boy_wonder 09-16-04 09:53 PM

lmao ,yeah dogg, uppin yall will return honest votez peace yall

Compose 09-16-04 10:12 PM

lol untouchable u just mad cuz i voted against u in one of your battles, talk about honest votes pick a winner cuz u thought it was hot not cuz u dont like me

untouchablekilla 09-16-04 10:17 PM

i did he ripped u son enuff said no go run along and play kid.

Compose 09-17-04 01:15 AM

untouchable just shut up no need to argue about stupid shit like this but dont come here sayin stupid shit like "enuff said no go run along and play kid.", just because your mad at me cuz i didnt vote for u doesnt mean u could be disrespectful....just grow up man got nothin against u, im ending it now....honest votes yall uppin...im out for today peace

¤ÐÅž¤ 09-17-04 07:51 AM

Voted For: final

BLAH,WEAK BATTLE ya'll both need to elevate alot,work on your punches n structure them right,go to the tutorials cause both you are badly needing it....final gets my vote for attempting a battle verse n not having as much self glorification in his verse...nuff said..elevate..!!!

Compose 09-17-04 10:48 AM

uppin......1 more vote just close battle on the next vote whoever it is, dont care if i win or not i need to elevate more

Compose 09-17-04 01:57 PM

uppin............................................. .

Spektikul 09-17-04 02:32 PM

Voted For: final

Boy Wonder:
Overall - 2/10

-Vocab was elementary
-didnt need the ... after every line
-Only multie was weak (hocus pocus)
-Basically whole verse was talking about what your gunna do to him, those arent punches, they are threats that will never happen...

Final:
Overall - 5/10

-Good vocab
-Solid structuring
-metas/multies are needed
-Personals are definatly needed cause you could basically use that verse on anyone on the site

As you can see from what I have just said above ^^^ Final is the winner here today. No hate, just an honest vote in my opinion. Peace....


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