yo i am in like 2 more battles, jump in an vote, yet vote honestly.

^^^months, word

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your not retiring, shot!!!!!!, hey man ive got like 8 battles on like at the same time, im doomed!!!! o well

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Voted For: Plutonium

plutionum took this with ease he had some pretty good vocab but needs some wordplay and stucture in there alright take my advice cuz im better then both of you:D but ya it was a dope battle but i dont like these normal battles that are so long 30 lines ou shouldent go any higher then 16 lines for a text battle unless its a topical but heres what i came up wit:
punches: P
vocab: P
wordplay: P
metas: no ones hit hard enough
multi's: no one
stucture: no one
flow: P
opener: P
closener: P
vote: Plutoium
return the favour in my battle in my sig thanks peace

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uppiin for some votes guys! yo vote honestly tho

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uppin for votes people comon

This was feedback posted for Mistic-Rogue
 

fcuk long but nice... hey you like that game mystic-rogue... thats a game you kno...

yo thx man, you i aint heard of no game called mstic-rogue thats just my counterstrike name..lol

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