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uppin this wack ass piece of shit..................
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
flow-manipulation got this down here, nfamous lines were streched and some were too short, manipulation for the most part everything was put together punches/personals-manipulation, lot better punches that were more creative and hit harder, all of nfamouses verse was basically dissin the fact shes a girl, gotta switch that shit up then the whole verse is plain and played wit no creativity vocab-manipulation, not much to say here she had better vocab here overall picked manipulation harder hitting punches and better flow, no hate on nfamous...did good too good luck peace |
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=150480 drop a honest vote on my shits, dont vote if u dont like me or cuz i didnt vote for u or somethin, just a honest vote, thanks peace |
Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
w00t u came harder |
Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
nfamous...aight verse...a few aight punches...nuthin special tho...ok personals...good flow...they were about the same....overall just an ok verse... manipultion....ur verse was better..purely on the punches hittin harder and u had better personals...structure and flow was good...overall decent verse... my vote...manipulation |
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