upppin............................................ ................ get this battle done

stop sleepen come on uppin............................

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Voted For: wish

vote goes to wish, over all a very good verse, it was mainly ryming but it was quite funny.

Intro:

I'll SNAP this AMATEUR'S-BACK til' he HAS-an-ASTHMA-ATTACK/
And his BLADDER-CONTRACTS and his bones CRACK-n-COLLAPSE, Pretty plain intro for wish, but...

my lyrics get u hooked, like tha purest form of coke
you call yourself an mc this must be a fuckin joke, well thats just plain stupid.! no hate just bro you need some wordplay

now nutz, you need to cut the self glorization, shit like....tha 1 to blame on tha way 2 fame u niggas know my name
It's Nutz...
44 Magnums bust, tha most qualified mc wit a flow u just cant touch....oi thats just like WTF, you are ment to be battling the other guy and mocking him not explaining who you are, i mean, who gives a f888. no hatte man just saying, stop saying good shit bout yourself and focus on making strong punches for your oppsition!

Have some DECENCY and practice on an HOURLY-BASIS
THIS COWARDLY-RACIST-AWAITS-SPITS that DEVOUR-HIS-BASICS/ now wish, this is good rymng, and pretty funny, but really its bullshit for rapverse, you'll get away with it early on but later you'll get dissed and start loosing, you need to have metaphores and word play, take the raping tutorials for some help, and study them ok, they really help.. no hate you guys just telling it how its is,

return the favour and jump in a vote on these please, i am dying to get these battles colsed, thx bye

Voted For: wish

wish shoulda KOed this guy lol how did he get a vote? lol some dumb fag voted for him haha wish took this with ease