i hate you guy, please, stop with the insanity. sheesh

uppin for votes Honest ones



-peace

-wreckage-

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Voted For: Word-Scape

Word-Scape
i truthfully dont understand why this nigga tried to step
he not on my "level", this ho, hes too "short" of breath
i get the wordplay but it wasnt like "oh shit" wordplay it was mediocre...decent
voters dont know you so all personals are useless
wanted to suck dick better, so he knocked himself toothless!
blah...its decent..suck dick lines are played though...
i cant believe this chicken so of course i gotta roast
voters screamin "5-0!" the the po-po's comin close
didnt jump out at me really but it was pretty cool...
tguy cant afford pornos, beats meat to risque shows on fox
the parts thats "sourdough"(sour-though), is the he has to "jack-in-the-box"!
blah...not a good finisher

nothing that special here but it made good sense so i give it to you...

wreckage
Fasten Your Seatbelts People..HE'S whack,
Gets in a rumble with wreckage'and he cant get his grove'back/
why is he's capitalized? its decent...
He's on my "sack" More than my own pubic's,
From what I hear from his girl, His dicks measured in "1/9ths cubics"//
hah...pretty good
I'm sick, So Im givin you the flu-bitch,
You come on this site like ery'body Likes ur ego, well Ima abuse-it//
blah...wack
You come in this "match" Blazin, But aint gotta crew yet'
doesnt that show you, Your just an Unevolved dissaprovement//
disapprovement is not a word...cmon maine
You talk so much shit when u open your mouth your "Word-E'scapes",
You will always be on this websites nerves'you'fake//
wack personal...
"Hmm"Lets see,This guys back again?,Shit Noone even knew he was here b4..
Its like hes been here 2 the block,wait I have seen him..he's that"girl-next-door"//
nope...
Ima "brutally" Beat this bitch for the record'
Couldnt put a "hook" to his barbie doll lines if he was mentor'd//
this doesnt make any sense
I'll hurt this fuck finally'He's fallin'away'
He just Pmed me, asking me if I would be his lover.....damn he must be gay..//LMFAO
wack...gay lines are played to death

your verse didnt really make sense...like seriously almost none of your punches make sense...you gotta work on that...if you think we wont get it make a star...i cant give you the win when i dont understand half your verse

u`ppin for votes Lets get this shit ended



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Uppin this! I need sum damn feed on this so it can get ended Thanx

-wreckage-

Voted For: Wreckage

Wreckage beat him hard on this battle i give more adquite feed back when i get back on latter

i truthfully dont understand why this nigga tried to step
he not on my "level", this ho, hes too "short" of breath
5/10
voters dont know you so all personals are useless
wanted to suck dick better, so he knocked himself toothless!
6.5/10
i cant believe this chicken so of course i gotta roast
voters screamin "5-0!" the the po-po's comin close
4/10
tguy cant afford pornos, beats meat to risque shows on fox
the parts thats "sourdough"(sour-though), is the he has to "jack-in-the-box"!
3/10
total 18.5/40

Fasten Your Seatbelts People..HE'S whack,
Gets in a rumble with wreckage'and he cant get his grove'back/
9/10
He's on my "sack" More than my own pubic's,
From what I hear from his girl, His dicks measured in "1/9ths cubics"//
8/10
I'm sick, So Im givin you the flu-bitch,
You come on this site like ery'body Likes ur ego, well Ima abuse-it//
10/10
You come in this "match" Blazin, But aint gotta crew yet'
doesnt that show you, Your just an Unevolved dissaprovement//
5/10
You talk so much shit when u open your mouth your "Word-E'scapes",
You will always be on this websites nerves'you'fake//
7/10
"Hmm"Lets see,This guys back again?,Shit Noone even knew he was here b4..
Its like hes been here 2 the block,wait I have seen him..he's that"girl-next-door"//
8/10

(Finish-Lines)

Ima "brutally" Beat this bitch for the record'
Couldnt put a "hook" to his barbie doll lines if he was mentor'd//
8/10
I'll hurt this fuck finally'He's fallin'away'
He just Pmed me, asking me if I would be his lover.....damn he must be gay..//LMFAO
6.5/10
total 61.5/80

so as you can see wreckage tore him the fuck up

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153343 (3-2)him
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152623 (2-2)

Cmon man uppin for votes

-Wreckage-

Voted For: Wreckage

aight this was a real close battle...
i think wreckages finisher got him the win, both had hard hittin punches, structure i couldnt fault any of u, personals were pretty evenly matched but word that pop pop like kinda took the hard hittin out of ya verse, wreckage got this, no hate just tellin it how i see it
return the fave
peace

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-wreckage-

Voted For: Word-Scape

Word-scape won this battle

SCape: your structures were both ok, nothin great......... i was gonna vote against u juss cuz u had to be the 20th person with a toothless line but after i saw wreck's finishers u were the winner.......... u had sum played lines but overalll i could say it was decent

Wreck: u sucked............ structure was kinda off, and ur two finishers was sum of the wackest shit ive heard............ u had that line about "word escapes" to get a personal in but besides that ur thing was only semi decent....... and ur overall verse didnt flow together, only individual bars seemed to go together, u needa work on that

besides that it was not a really good battle, but no hate, juss try and get better at wat yall do........ v/word

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