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fluidmoon 09-20-04 12:34 PM

This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 
wow, nice verse man, uppin for the crew...........

[.:D:.] 09-20-04 04:00 PM

This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 
just checkin the polls.......Mindz Kollide stand up.....

Parallel 09-20-04 07:19 PM

This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 
yo empire you got Ko'ed lol no ofense but triple is way more played with punches but i cant vote we the same crew:(

In-Vision 09-20-04 09:30 PM

This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 
i think empire took this....tripple n your punches were pretty good..and one stood out...it was by the best punch in the battle

Closet homos insinuate gayness to cover theirs, proven by shrinks
Empire has accused others of it over 200x, hmm..makes ya think

and the one about beef was true too...but over all...line for line..i thought empire came harder

lil C.A.L.I 09-20-04 11:52 PM

Voted For: Empire

AIght u got this but really u gotta elavate jus a lil but your rhymes are good 9/10 structure is a 8/10 and your punchlines are 10/10 so tripple n keep practicein and u can get sum ppl aight so my vote goes to-----> Empire

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Valor 09-21-04 12:16 AM

Voted For: Triple_N

damn
empire
u had good punches but they didnt hit hard but some did,ur flow was good,ur structure was nice man,u had good vocab and personals iguess,ur opener was okay,but your closer was poo poo....i also liked the wordplay set into your verse dawg....

triple
your punches were good man they hit hard...although the first couple lines were wack..u raped this kid towards the end and the rest of your verse,ur flow was coo,and the structure was dope also,ur vocab and wordplay was nice in this too....nice personals towards the end,wack opener and a hard hitting coler that did damage

overall both had good wordplay,vocab,structure,flow,and okay personals in this,but with better and hard hitting punches im gonna say triple n takes this....empire not bad man props

v/triple n

Status 09-21-04 12:29 AM

Voted For: Triple_N

aight hee we go i say htat trioke n wins this

TRIPLE N: you got this becuz you actually had good punches and good personlas......that beef line was aight....you shoudl have just used alil more meta4s and liek one more perosnal....but all ina ll good battle..

empire: no hate just waas only feelin the gay lines those were the only good lines...but i aint homo pobic or nothin so i didnt really care.......but yeah i think since you battlin so much you are fallin offf but just calm down with the battlin....but good spit though...im lookin foward to battle you

vote=triplen

Klassic 09-21-04 01:21 AM

Voted For: Empire

way betta personals personals win battles, shit more flow and structure, and vocab was a wee betta

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Terumoto 09-21-04 05:36 AM

Voted For: Triple_N

This was a hard decision... didnt wanna vote on either one in case i changed my mind.. lol.. cos they were both good..

but..

Empire: Good flow, good backed up punches... But i wast feelin ya metas and wordplay.. It's not as good if you dont get wordplay straight away, n ya have to read explinations n all that shit... But it was a nice verse. Some original and witty stuff in there.

Triple: Ya flow fell off BIG TIME at some points... but only like twice.. then ya got it back on quick.. Made up for it with them punches though.. some good shit.. and nice personals..

^^no disrespect.. cos you both came well... but voters gotta make choices... -_-

Dirty Nigga 09-21-04 07:11 PM

Voted For: Triple_N

aiiiiiiiiight

Triple N Got this....

more complex verse, better structre n punches, loved the finisher too, nice drop N...

empire, ya flow was ...BLAH, it was neither here or there, some of ya punches hit hard, but other lines failed you, TRIPLE N got the more consistent verse thats why im votin for him...

return the fave in my sig

P E A C E

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The Black Plague 09-22-04 03:37 PM

Voted For: Triple_N

This goes to triple, easily in my opinion...

Empire ya verse started out okay, had some decent personals thrown in there except for the mexican wages line, it didn't make sense... but after you got past ya 5th line, wit the "racist pics" line, it went downhill... that really threw off ya flow, and took away from the rest of ya verse...i mean u tried rhymin "battle" and "shadow".. WTF? Your closer was decent, but you coulda done more wit it, or made more lines with it

Triple N you had a nice verse... opener was nice, hit hard and gave you a good start...Next 4 lines were so/so, but the exercise line killed it, it was a hard hittin personal and was funny as fuck... Also ya closer was nice, and i think it's important to have a solid opener and closer, it makes your overall verse better...Some of ya lines were played, like the "beef" line, but it wasn't bad and didnt' take away from the rest of your verse...

Overall my vote goes to Triple, he had harder hitting punches and better personals, and he stayed more consistent throughout his verse than empire did...

V/ Triple N


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