Voted For: Red Bull

ie- nah horrific structure, bad punches, everything was off please stop the insanity and drop waaaaaaay better than that next time....2/10

red- ehh urs was iight i mean like enuff to win but not ill. structure was streched, punches were played and the rest was just average which makes it way better than a 2 soooooo........5/10
both need to continue elevatin
rtf links in the sig

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Voted For: Red Bull

Intensity Effect

my mind convinced for acepting u'r stupied heres the consequence
punch u in the cheat so hard forensic gotta dust ya spine for prints *ouch*

didn't rhyme, not a hard hitting punch.

ya verse be soft my contines acid... u'r sick? only cuz u'r spits was produce by cough's
shit i'll dead red-bull "point-man" by cuting hes fingers off *HA*

didn't really make sense. not feelin your punch.

my verse i'll have ya "not lookin to drop" like good boxser with large names
i'll put ya bars 2 ashame w/ viscious shot that'll have ya trying to "deal with faults" like "retarted card games"

decent punch. stretched though.

u couldnt spit ill so it time u get off my nuts
plus u couldnt spit fire if ya verse was attached to a ciggertte butt's

not a bad closer, 1st line was strange though. 2nd good.

Red Bull

hows intensify effect supposed to get respect, when hes battle rookies instead of vets
i detect that the kids a family reject, born with a defect, noboday wants to see that

nice multi's in there, good punch. didn't rhyme the 2 lines though.

your a bitch made vermon, when you see my name your worryin, gettin nervous
i'll leave you to fry like a jew in the furnace screamin "please don't burn us"

also good multi's, decent punch.

its fantastic that you'll get your ass kicked through a keyboard thats plastic
kids fuckin drastic, only action he gets is from his avitars graffic

lol, good personal. hard hitting. again, good multi's.

overall, red bull took this one, he had harder hitting punches and a witty closer. intensity, i wasn't really feeling your verse, some of it didn't seem to make much sense. no hate, just honest opinion.

v/ red bull

Voted For: Red Bull

red bull - nice sturcture and flow through out, good punches aswell, good personal at the end aswell, liked that very much. i liked your whole verse good opener and closer.

intestify effect- aight your lines didnt even rhyme until the 6th lines which is wack. even if the lines did rhyme they would still be wack and didnt really hit hard. try and keep your line length more consistant, they were all over the place.

vote goes to red bull, for better punches and basiclly everything.

no hate

uppppp..................................

Voted For: intensify effect

intensify effect wins this cuz red bull always puts some shit bout some one screaming outloud something,
rd bull, i waana rematch

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^^^ hahaha hate vote idiot, be dq'd your a loser, i koed thats right 5-0 go finger your asshole...up up bitches

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uppidy uppidy once again...fuck, somebody drop some votes on this shit

Voted For: Red Bull

aightyou got this mainly becuz of your personals....that vet line was perfect becuz all he does is battles newbs,,,,,but good battle you guys were both good but need to elevate a lot more....godd spit though..........goood battle though

i would liek to battle intesy effect or watever his name is

word, thanks for feedback.....up up up up up and away bitches

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up...fuck don't sleep on this shit yallllllllllllllll

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Voted For: Red Bull

rebull took thi shit, he came out eit a better opener, much better closer and a couple of tight personals, altought his structure was alittle off
intensify effect had a average verse eit nuthing special in it a t all, and i couldn't get past tha horrible structure
vote=rebull, for punches,structure, opener and closer

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