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XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 10-04-04 06:11 PM

Voted For: $ik Wit It™

calls me out, n unlike half this site i dont make an eternal excuse.
i had no idea you cats were still around, after the open mic by verbal abuse.
^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD OPENER AND A PUNCH

im ferdal with truth, and deadly as im servin him fonts.
and all Ai said was:

Quote:
Originally Posted by Phantom
something that wack, doesnt even deserve a response.


i better go back and retake social studies as this months elective.
cause i was unaware that ppl who duck so often, can be so much respected.
^^^^^^^^^^^ OOOO NICE PERSONALS AND A PUNCH NICE



fuck effective, all together you need to quit spits.
hows this bitch avoiding to slit wrists when hes just a check on a hit list.
your only dope with a bong, and its too late to forfit this.
ellas missed it, cause im still wondering what it is that your sick with?
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE YO GOOD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES



ELLA-HAD GOOD PUNCHES&PERSONALS AND FLOW



We Can Play Simon Says and We Can Call This Oppisite Day …
U Can Command A Win, But $ik Will Just Take It Away…
Easily Knock-Aside-Ya-Punchez, like puttin' Doorz Nex-Ta-Fists…
Like Dehydrated-Midgit-Bungeez, ya Fall-Too-Short for Top-Spitz
^^^^^^^^^^ HA GOOD PUNCH HARD PUNCH NICE FLOW


Fuckin' Shake-Ya-Cranium! Like Brainz-Placed-In-Blenderz…
Ya Sequeled-Health-Moviez! Don't Come-Complete in Sickest-Enderz…
This kid a Hero? Shit he aint Fly and he even has a Torn Cape…
And I hit punches in his Face like Graphical Porn Tapes…
Might As Well Call Me Lil Flip, The Way I'm Revising Ya Verse …
This Game's Over, I Can See Them Now, Already Carrying In Ya Hearse…
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE


EMCEE HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW


VOTE GOES TO EMCEE-CAUSE BASICALLY HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES

ELLA-UR GOOD U HAD NICE PUNCHES& PERSONALS BUT DIDNT HIT HARD ENOUGH KEEP IT UP
USE HARDER PUNCHES AIGHT~!

~PEACE~

SkOtEe 10-04-04 06:35 PM

Voted For: ella

ella took this,

over all a better flow,
a few personals and harder hitting punches,
some of emcees were ok but not as hard hitting!
both were simple but worked well....

nice battle but ella came out on top!

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

SkOtEe 10-04-04 06:35 PM

return the favor.......
check the link in my sig!!

peace......

Parallel 10-05-04 12:05 AM

Voted For: $ik Wit It™

Emcee:
k sik wit it came way ahrder he had stucutre and flow on even like a vets and mine now:) but anyway he hit harder with his punches and wordplay he was also hittin with un common words in his lines witch i liked, he came way harder but hsi vocab was weak coula been bette rwhats with hearse and verse? whats hearse mean lol?

Ella:
fuckin dope for a newb lol i belive a newb but anyway she or he im gonna say she. she had nice vocab but off on stucutre and wordplay she was played by her one vocabulary is what i felt i dont know about any one else but sik wit it is beoned her.

VOTE: Emcee aka. sik wit it

return the favour in any of my battles..

Sik Wit It 10-05-04 08:48 AM

uppin for votes............

Sik Wit It 10-05-04 02:08 PM

uppin...................

JackOfAllTradez 10-05-04 02:32 PM

Voted For: $ik Wit It™

wow first off hott battle and its obvious that you both are at eachothers throats so ill start my vote...

Emcee:Emcee lol

Verse:
We Can Play Simon Says and We Can Call This Oppisite Day …
U Can Command A Win, But $ik Will Just Take It Away…
Easily Knock-Aside-Ya-Punchez, like puttin' Doorz Nex-Ta-Fists…
Like Dehydrated-Midgit-Bungeez, ya Fall-Too-Short for Top-Spitz…
Fuckin' Shake-Ya-Cranium! Like Brainz-Placed-In-Blenderz…
Ya Sequeled-Health-Moviez! Don't Come-Complete in Sickest-Enderz…
This kid a Hero? Shit he aint Fly and he even has a Torn Cape…
And I hit punches in his Face like Graphical Porn Tapes…
Might As Well Call Me Lil Flip, The Way I'm Revising Ya Verse …
This Game's Over, I Can See Them Now, Already Carrying In Ya Hearse…

Comments:ok hott shit...straight outta ya ass...lol i have nothin else to comment on...

Marks:
Wordplay - 7/10
Metas - 8/10
Vocabulary - 7/10
Structure - 8/10
Punches - 8/10
Opener - 6/10
Closer – 7/10
Personals – 6/10
Enjoyment – 7/10
Creativity - 6/10
Overall - 67/100
----------67%


Emcee:ella

Verse:
Ok umm...

calls me out, n unlike half this site i dont make an eternal excuse.
i had no idea you cats were still around, after the open mic by verbal abuse.
im ferdal with truth, and deadly as im servin him fonts.
and all Ai said was:

Quote:
Originally Posted by Phantom
something that wack, doesnt even deserve a response.


i better go back and retake social studies as this months elective.
cause i was unaware that ppl who duck so often, can be so much respected.
fuck effective, all together you need to quit spits.
hows this bitch avoiding to slit wrists when hes just a check on a hit list.
your only dope with a bong, and its too late to forfit this.
ellas missed it, cause im still wondering what it is that your sick with?[/FONT]

Comments:man..you really took it to the guy.....nice personals...luved the open mike part and the quote by phantom...i just liked emcees more...no hate

Marks:
Wordplay - 6/10
Metas - 7/10
Vocabulary - 5/10
Structure - 5/10
Punches - 5/10
Opener - 8/10
Closer – 7/10
Personals – 9/10
Enjoyment – 6/10
Creativity - 7/10
Overall - 63/100
----------63%

JackOfAllTradez 10-05-04 02:33 PM

return the favor.........in the sig..

Sik Wit It 10-06-04 09:06 AM

uppin........................

Sik Wit It 10-06-04 01:18 PM

uppin.......................

Peter Parker 10-06-04 01:41 PM

This was feedback posted for $ik Wit It™
 
booooooooooo! just checking things out dudes...&dudette:)

...Nemesis... 10-06-04 01:43 PM

Voted For: ella

wow this one was close. ella u had some good punches and vocab.emcee u had some pretty good punches to but when it comes down to it i think ella took this one.

check out my battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=153747

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mc_funny1 10-06-04 03:02 PM

Voted For: $ik Wit It™

pucnhes-swi/emc
stukta-ski-emc
pers-ski-emc
best-ski-emc
emc wins dis his verse was much better
pz

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Sik Wit It 10-07-04 02:04 PM

uppin..........................

mc_funny1 10-07-04 03:34 PM

Voted For: $ik Wit It™

pucnhes-swi/emc
stukta-ski-emc
pers-ski-emc
met-ski-emc
pers-none
mult-none
emcee wins his punches actuly landed
ella had punches but wasnt as hard as emcees and didnt land probley
pz


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