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Compose 09-20-04 08:46 PM

uppin.........................................agai n

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Compose 09-24-04 12:58 PM

uppin vote to finish this battle...................

Compose 09-24-04 04:13 PM

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Compose 09-24-04 09:04 PM

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Compose 09-25-04 10:06 AM

uppin...............................get this shit over with

Dirty Nigga 09-25-04 11:15 AM

Voted For: final

not the strongest battle in the battle....

final, ya structure was better, both lacked creativity in ya rhymes, the better vocab was from final an the better strcure came from final so he gets my vote...

return the fave in my sig

p e a c e

Compose 09-25-04 01:30 PM

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MaNiPuLaTiOn 09-25-04 01:55 PM

Voted For: final

firstly
CFASTUNNAL
WACK-seriously pathetic.sorry lol
no structure,no flow,no multies.......
u didnt have a single punch or personal u jus through a bunch of words together,half ur shit didnt even make sense,u had no vocab,no wit,no metas.nothin at all........horrible verse....
take a look at ur opponents n set ur shit like that ..elevate.

FINAL
structure was good....
flow was ok....
basically u had a better verse,beta punchesw,stuc,flow,etc....
still say u need to elevate a lot though...
ur best line was the stun a crowd shit,coz u attempted a meta and sum wordplay,all the rest were really jus filler....
u gotsta cum wit metas n wit to make ya punches dope.
u won.but elevate....

hit me up if u want any help wit anythin..

Compose 09-25-04 04:41 PM

uppin....................................one more vote


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