uppin for this shit

uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

Voted For: Quick Witted

Scenario got this...
better structure, witty punches, nice metas n personals, just the better verse on the whole..
no one believes in ya style or talent~cause that would be like christopher reeves trying to ice skate
unlike u others are successful at winning~cause there's a better chance of illegal immigrants trying to migrate
^^^^
that was niiiice
decent drop scenario, keep em comin..

c.f.s, ya structure was horrible, i couldnt find ya bars, matter fact, there was none!...it was just all one big mess, improve on that, i aint gonna comment on the rest of ya verse cause i couldnt find the rhyms, structure was disgraceful, improve that kid
no hate, just tellin it how i see it

return fave

p e a c e

uppin for this, i'll return the honest votes

uppin for this, i'll return the honest votes

uppin for this, i'll return the honest votes

uppin in this bitch, i'll return the honest votes

uppin for this, i'll return the honest votes

uppin for this, i'll return the honest votes

uppin for this, i'll return the honest votes

uppin for this, i'll return the honest votes

Voted For: Quick Witted

Scenario won this easly. you had stretched bars but that can be easily fixed. punches were ok hit quite hard overall.
CFAstunna1 structure was bad. wasn't set up rite at all and you were boasting in your opener.punches you said you watch Tv with ET .:laugh:
pz.

Voted For: Quick Witted

wot the fuck i dont understand how u put as title q w n the person droppin is scen but there we go

punches-qw/sc
pers-qw/sc
stture-cfa
lyked-qw/sc
best-qw/sc
qw/sc win dis 1 withotu a dout
pz out