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ThirdDegree 10-23-04 09:02 AM

Voted For: teken.

Sortin shit out.....

record equals "0-3" thats your record bitch you can't "beat me"
i'm untouchable i wont run away and you still wont be able to "reach me"
^^Good opening. Rest of verse was ok not played pretty origanl but not great. unches were ok and flow was good. Good structure. I like da mattee who line. 6/10

leave ya with more chins than a chinese FONEBOOK//i got more RYHMEZ than a CHINESE RESTURANT's got cats to COOK
^^Best line but first part is SOOOO played i ain't even funny. Simplisitc and reheated is the onyl way i can describe the rest of the verse. Not a personal in there just a bunch of off beat swings. STUCTURE SUCKED and rhyme sceme was off in places. 4/10

Nice battle

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Red Stroke 10-24-04 05:38 AM

Voted For: teken.

lol one sided battle
with tha little lines he spit he got tha flow cuzz he came better Mat need elivation cuzz ya rhymes is played out use ya same shit every time but Tek got this vote cuzz he came harder with tha little lines he spit


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