Voted For: Poet

Poet: flow was decent. Punches were not as hard but had a sense of humor to them. A few personals. structure was not great but better then shotta's. Your verse is not vet material
nothing really great.

Shotta: Nice opener. I couldn't flow with your verse that good. so your flow was off. Punches were okay. A few hit harder then poets. But this was not great at all.

Have to go with poet on this one

return the favor

This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
 

Booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo You Fucking Suck Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp in

Word, ofcoarse its not vet material.. I never do normal battles lmao..

UPPIN THIS SHIZZNIT

Voted For: Poet

shotta... wasnt really feelin ya verse .. flow was sorty wierd.. structure messed.. aight punches i guess.. but ya personals didnt really hit hard.. n whas with the speech marks where theres no wordplay????????? i seen way better from you.. -_-

poet: WAY shitter than ya topicals.. lol.. But still good.. nuthin wrong with flow, or punches.. but there was no lines that made me laugh or go "Ooo" .. why arent you dope! its not that hard.. its just like a topical where the topic is shottaboy

no hate

one

Because I dont usually rap with disses n shit.. And I wrote it in about 20 minutes so blah...

Uppin to finish this shit.

poet made me want to keep reading this. nice verse homie

Uppin again........................................

Voted For: Poet

This was a one sided battle..
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Opener-Poet
Closer-Poet
Flow-Poet
Structure-Poet
Punches-Tied
Metas-Poet (Shotta had little to none)
Personals-Poet
Overall Best Verse-Poet

Advise to shotta-try to get your structure better your lines go from short to long and back to short quick......and try to get more personals and work on your punches and if you do this you will see more votes goin your way!......Vote/Poet