uppin for more votes stop sleeping and get voting fair votes will be returned just leave a link...

uppin for votes... leave a link and ill return the favour... peace.

Voted For: Intellekt

this battle was very wack.Neither had any good personals or punches,then structures were decent,nothing special about flows or wordplay,but Intellekt had the upper hand with his vibrator line but in the end,both need to elevate.
V/Intellekt.
Return an honest vote in the battle in my dig.

This was feedback posted for teken.
 

Not sure why you qoted your words, If a verse is good, then it is good no need to try and point things out IMO< ,, Anyway dont have enough post to vote . But if i could vote i dont really know who i would vote for both could have been better, and its a hard call,

Voted For: teken.

I gotta say Explicit won it

He had a nice openin Verse
He came hard at da opponent
Good punchlines, Structure good
didn't came weak in any parts
keep doin ya thing
explicit

Intellekt
Openin Verse also good
structure nice
Punchlines didn't hit dat hard
though he came hard at explicit

it was a close match
both of ya did ya thing, keep doin what u do
both of u guys....

no hate or notin on this vote

aight uppin for votes leave a link and ill return the favour peace...

uppin for votes lets get this over with

Voted For: teken.

vote explicit,
hes flow was smothe N easy to follow, punches was effective and easy to grasp while diss was preety funny, creativeness was slightly above average and all around nice drop

intell not a bad verse,
but u need harder punches to win battle u'r punches just wasnt up to par but u also had a smothe flow and some lines was decent and creativeness was average but still not a bad verse some good lines but u just need it more good lines then what u did have but nice drop...

return honest votes only plez.....

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Voted For: teken.





ill nurture this kid but not how mother nature would//
but infect and defect this mind like no Satan could//
^^^^^^^^ EHHHH NOT AN GOOD PUNCH NEWBISH TOO BASIC


maybe shoulda got ur posts up, maybe u shoulda bit//
no matter, i spit clean, maybe even make ur clothes fit//
^^^^^^^^^^ WEAK MAYNE NOT AN GOOD PUNCH TOO BASIC

ill kill u for naming urself after a fighting game, such a shame//
elementary lines bully this kid off this sites mainframe//
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT PERSONAL AND AN PUNCH NICE


im the ill rhyme slayer ultimate spine breaker...
this pussy wouldnt fuck with me if i was a vibrator!!
^^^^^^^^^^^ LOL NICE MAYNE GOOD CLOS

INTELLEKT-YO VERSE WAS "Ok" TOO BASIC TO ME DA 1ST 3 WAS TOO BASIC,,,,,ELEVATIN USING CREATIVE PUNCHES MAYNE




i'm "intellekt"ual, stab you in "your neck" and you'll
act like a retard, fingers fucked up you'll start to drool
^^^^^^^^ ERM "OK" PUNCH


ill give you a "stroke of genious" with a swift back hand
cut off your tongue so your food starts to taste bland
^^^^^^^^^^ THATS NICE GOOD PUNCH

on the mic imma "genius", i write rhymes for "einstein"
this rookies "rhymes" are predictable i can tell line by "line"
^^^^^^^^^ ERM TOO BASIC

ill saw through your head and leave it stuck half way,
the only way you get rhymes is through the bank, you pay
^^^^^^^^^^ ERM WEAK PUNCH


your a homo who likes to spend quality time with "boys"
playing with dirty "toys" trying not to make a loud "noise"
^^^^^^^^^ HUH NOT AN GOOD CLOSA

EXPLICIT CONTENT-OK VERSE MAYNE U HAD GOOD FLOW AND "OK" PUNCHES

OVERALL=YALL BOTH CAME A LIL WEAK IN DIS BATTLE TOO BASIC DIS AN "OK" BATTLE,BUT I HAVE TO GO WITH "EX"
HE CAME A LIL HARDER ON PUNCHES,,,,,,,,,IT JUST INTELLEKT WAS TOO BASIC AND NEWBISH ELEVATE ON USING CREATIVE PUNCHES~!

V-"EX" CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES (EDGE IT)

INTELLKT-WORK ON USING CREATIVE PUNCHES AND USE MORE PERSONALS

~peace~