yo lets finish this battle plz, UPPN

yo lets not sleep on dis battle mayne... holla at me dawg

Voted For: Quick Witted

VOTE SCENARIO

better wordplay , creativity, punches and playin that line of his name



this kid couldn't bribe for a win even if he had 20 Grand
coulnd't come near to touching me even if he had 20 hands

20 grand not bad could be better with a lil elevating.....
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Ill set you "on fire", cuz pussy your wetter than B,
If i gave u my salaiva, you still couldnt spit better than me,
You "pray to god" you stand a chance, shit ur pants in da chappel,
I swear to god wit does fruit of the loom pants, your fruitier than snapple.
those were pretty wack and not hard hitting at all

GET MORE CREATIVE AND UP YA PUNCHES A LIL MORE

NO HATE JUST THE FACTS

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uppin for this, looking for a comeback, is it possible

coming people, need to get some battles closed, i'll return the honest vote, uppin for this bitch

Voted For: 20 GraND

20 grand: this wasn't the best battle i've read... cuz this battle was pretty weak... you were only a lil bit creative..dat iw wut u really need to work on!! alot!! u should also try to think of good metaphors and even try to do personals!!!just uppin on vocab espceially k!!

scenario..your verse was very weak..it was mostly elementry.. but its pretty good for a person like u i guess.. you really need to uppin on vocab..cuz ur rhymes are elementry..and work on ur punchlines so it will hit harder...

vote: 20

uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

lets finish this battle plz, vote it upppppp

UppNNN finish him.. lol

This was feedback posted for Quick Witted
 

nice drop from tha both of u... just checkin polls....

Voted For: Quick Witted

waddup imma vote for scenario b/c it flowed better n there r better use of words but it was a tough choice to tell ya'll the truth they're both really good

Voted For: 20 GraND

20 Grand Won it
Good Structure, Nice Punchlinez
Openin Verse Good, Not alot of Wordplay
but good...Came hard at Scenario
keep doin ya thing 20 Grand

Scenario
Didn't have alot of Punchlinez
Wordplay Not alot
Good Structure
Openin Verse Good, came a bit weak on some parts though

I was Feelin 20 Grand betta aight...
Ain't hatin or notin Scenerio...

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