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Voted For: Plutonium

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plutonium~nice flow in this verse, you had good multies and wordplay, liked the paroll-ing line, it was dope,and your verse had hard hitting punches and pesonals as well,liked the opener, it was funny,and the last bar was creative and well worded, nice job
Daclassic~your verse was good too, nice flow as well,but you didnt really have very strong punches, although i did like your closing bar, was preety good,some alright personals too, but just didnt seem to hit as hard as plutoniums,but good job as well.......

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Voted For: Daclassic

Daclassic
All this talk and chit chatter about me, Trust me it don't matter
Don't get me mad or even madder, I'd slap you -- but shit splatters
the shit splatters thing was hilarious...wouldve been wack without that
But I know what you after, Is it fame? Daclassic a benifactor
Only way Plutonium gets hot, If he's thrown in nuclear reactors
the word benefactor doesnt really make sense in that sentence...you forced the rhyme to carry it...i think you wouldve better off just not carrying the rhyme and making a hotter punch
But watch me off this guy, A "W" won't be sought in his eyez
Plutonium loses so much on rapverse it seems to be unauthorized
i didnt really understand the second line...why is it unauthorized to lose a lot?
Stretch lines? I notice you shrink the size to compact in bunches
An alcoholic will be mad, Your bars aint open to bring punches
ha...pretty funny punch here
So don't believe what you read, And Especially your crap verse
You the number one reason this site shouldn't be rap verse
pretty good closer here...

overall this was so-so...it didnt feel like you were trying that hard but it was obvious there was skill behind the bars...like when someone makes a no show verse and tries to be wack but they accidentaly put multis without even thinking...not saying it was wack i mean i can just tell you are better than this

Plutonium

Just six months in your game, and you call yourself Daclassic//*
I say I want your ass kicked…Messiah lisps “I tnew ru ssa kcikd”//*
i didnt understand the lisp quote...you made it too confusing...
Your wack wordplay misfired, your weak punches flows elementary//
I leave your big ass stuck on “Par, roll”ing in a black penitentiary//(Parole)
blah...not feelin it
My “full court press” defense have you “passed out” with no clue//
You can let “disaster strikes”, & still can’t get “a bolt from the blue”//
pretty good stuff here...this was a good bar
You think you’re “That much better?” I think you’re just a wanker//**
You think you gangster? I’ll just “Soul Clap” you like a doppelganger//***
no...not feelin this at all
No matter how "tight" you "sleep", you still can’t "live the dream"//
You can’t clean my “Ocean of Thoughts” even if you labeled “Chlorine”//
not too bad...it was good wordplay it just didnt really jump out at me...


your verse was real hard to understand at the beginning...twoards the end it got kinda weak...i wasnt really feelin this verse from you either..you put like a lot of effort into wordplay but then not too much into punches that hit hard


v/Daclassic...for harder-hitting punches...

That was my fault it meant that it seemed to be unauthorized for him to win.

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Voted For: Plutonium

PLUTONIUM GOOD OPENER LOL GOOD WORDPLAY ON SECOND BAR NICE STRUCTURE AND GOOD VOCAB ENDER WAS KINDA WEAK BUT OK ALSO GOOD PERSONALS ALSO HELPED MAKE YOUR VERSE BETTER A 7/10
DACLASSIC GOOD FLOW HERE GOOD OPENER THAT HOT LINE WAS WACK GOOD ASS VOCAB BUT YOUR PUNCHES WERE WEAK AND YOUR ENDER WAS STRAIGHT GARBAGE NO HATE BUT I THOUGHT YOU WAS BETTER THEN THIS YOUR PUNCHES WERE MEGA WEAK AND PLAYED AND YOUR GOOD VOCAB CANT HIDE THAT A 5/10