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^supportin' my fam- nice drop fluidmoon and not bad empire either... good luck you two with this one..

HE JOINED THE COUNCIL THIS MORNING HE AINT CREW VOTE NICE TRY

Voted For: fluidmoon

Ok, while both of you had good structure and some good punches, I say Fluid took this. Empire, you had some multi's going, but Fluid had better vocab and her punches were harder, and by harder I also mean more original. Empire, your verse was filled with the same things you post in every thread...shit about sonning people, and calling her a Carson groupie, etc... you even said it in your verse that she won't win because you have everyone that thinks she did better blacklisted...LMAO 'nuff said...
Vote - Fluidmoon

Return the vote to the link in my sig, honest explained votes only please...

^this niggas a fucking faggot we call your crew out and you immediately go vote aganist me yous a fucking bitch ass homo whatever faggot obvious hate vote :gfy:

will you stop, hes right, it doesnt mean its a hate vote.....he didnt say anything degrading about you......

NO YOU VOTED FOR HIM HE IMMEDIATLY VOTED FOR YOU :huh: REAL FUNNY PLUS I GO BEEF WITH HIM IN THE C.S THREAD AND HE IMMEDIATLY GOES AND VOTES AGANIST ME THATS HO SHIT FO REAL YOU KNOW YOU LOST

How do we have beef with each other? I'm not even in the crew battle! And besides, Fluid and I were talking and had some battles to be voted on, so we voted...honestly. So don't get mad at me for an honest vote...

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Voted For: fluidmoon

Empire
Fuck the explanations about shit thats obvious.. that took away big from ur punches.. structure was good.. flow fell off a little.. u had nice multis.. wordplay was dope.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. quite a bit of them were played, i.e. poetry=no money, all dick punches.. u attempted personals, but only like, 1 or 2 of them connected..

fluidmoon
structure is good.. flow is on target.. u also had pretty good multis.. wordplay was decent.. some of ur punches connected, maybe i didnt get it, but what was up with the fries one?.. good personals though.. i.e. the banned one, and pugsly.. funny shit..

Overall
Empire had more and better multis.. as well as better wordplay.. both had a good structure.. fluidmoon had harder, and more connecting punches.. as well as better personals.. so basing off of that.. punches and personals have always been more important then multis and wordplay, so fluidmoon gets my vote..

VOTE - FLUIDMOON

thats some bullshit, i dont ask for votes, unlike you who gets the same people to D/R your cheating ass, your so fucked up empire.....

Voted For: Empire

rofllllll...

u both had some funny shit yo...but i gatta say empire gets this for a lil...his punches hit harder and were a lil mo funny...moon had tight punches too.. both had good personals and structure was good!!...but on my opinion empire gets this for more funny & interessting punches...


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Voted For: fluidmoon

props to both lyricists on this one, good battle but here's the verdict

flow:empire
seriousness:fluid
punches:fluid
structure:fluid
vocab:empire
verdict:Empire your strong points were some of the lines you spit, had some cleverness to it. But the feeling i got about this verse is that it lacked intensity, and was a lil dry. was a good use of personals, but it just seemed run of the mill from you, and i know you could come harder.
Fluids off top had intensity in it, which i respect, when you battle no matter how many times you've done it, you have to continue to come raw, which she did. Also i liked her structure better, although it wasn't a lot better, i liked it better. So for better intensity, and hunger i'm giving this one to Fluidmoon. Good battle you guys.

Voted For: fluidmoon

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fuck delete that shit

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