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yo this goes to one-man-band cuz your multi's were sick and went with each other more they werent off topic and flow was just plain out set you got this multi's battle hands down cuz your shit was more on topic
white_tee you had some nice multi's but you just kept dragin things on i mean yeh you had flow but your multi's were off topic and i just got tired of reading it when i got to the middle but i read the whole thing so i could have more basis for this vote i also noticed you kept using workd like chips/clit/and tits....get some better volcab
best lines
one-man-band[QUOTE]fuckin netcees be wrecked easy cos in multi battles not even the best beat me
white tee? Please kid, you’re a rook.. half the cats on rv aint heard a ya the rest sleeping
talking n squawkin shit, fuck that ill leave ya morbid fa startin this..
challengin me to a multi battle? man… youre more stuck up than a narcasist[QUOTE/]
white_tee[QUOTE]I'll Leave Ya Brain In Pieces~Covered Where 'da~napkin~lies' Have You 'Battle In Brail' After I 'attack~ur~eyes'[QUOTE/]

v/one-man-band if i could

return the favor if u want

Voted For: One-Man-Band

White Tee- verse was alright mate u had alright multi's there, vocab was all decent n shit man i just didnt really feel your verse like it was pretty played out aye u might have gone overboard trying to get multis there and some of them lack quality.

Band - verse was dope flows was off the hook man this shit was ALRIGHT! what more can i say?

Vote - One Man Band

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Voted For: One-Man-Band

aiight OMB took this one with awsome multis and more than what white had.......
white ur battle was pretty good a 5/10
OMB ur battle was pretty damn good man i give it 7.5/10..
both u guyz fought a good battle, no hate white tee but OMB took this one... return favour...

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Voted For: One-Man-Band

OMB get my vote, his multis were crazy, white tee's multis seemed a lil too simple and and there wasnt as many as them either so i have to give it to OMB.

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ohhh my god what the fuck white tee???? YOU LOST MAN I FUCKIN BEAT YOU... the fuck... stupid bitches bitchin... GET OVER IT I FUCKIN BEAT YOU... you know how hard it is to get shit closed these days.... fuck..

Voted For: One-Man-Band

this fag's as wack as wack gets, and that's just my first impression
usin my words as weapons, to burst and wreck him i'll teach this herb a lesson
put you in an even worse depression by sendin cursed verse in this nerds direction,

/\ This opener had mad multies the rhyming flow and structure word perfect wordplay dope way to start

scythin ya head. i bring more punches than that last cypher ya read.
graspin some scissors, “net”bitch, cos its obvious ya whole “lifes on a thread”
/\ nice punch multies in there some real good flow nice struc too

fuckin netcees be wrecked easy cos in multi battles not even the best beat me
white tee? Please kid, you’re a rook.. half the cats on rv aint heard a ya the rest sleeping
/\ lol nice punch decent multi dawg wordplay again real strong

This stooge is ripped clean, fuck scythes, dude my fists reap… bruise him swiftly..
Check ya name.. how ya expect to out-multi me? Kid, ya cant even use the shift key
/\ Whoa punch bang bang wallop again multi there too flow strong structure maintaining too

talking n squawkin shit, fuck that ill leave ya morbid fa startin this..
challengin me to a multi battle? man… youre more stuck up than a narcasist
/\ dope multi here punch aight not as strong as the others but good none the less flow and structure top notch still

Open ya chest n splatter ya ribs, kid im bad as there is, n im at it to win
Blasts to ya chin, till ya battered n skinned from ya brain matter to shins
/\ Hott wordplay usin body parts punch multi all there flow and struc still not slippin

Ya makin me ball with laughter… cos when ya drop ya battles they all disasters
Scold n’ slash ya, punish this kid, n’ roll him after… just fa tryna kickit with the Multi-Master
/\ Nice closer usin ur nick-name as a multi flow still there as was the flow...dope verse

I'd give ya an 8.5/10 the multies as usual mad and the flow and structure made sure it didn't slip...also the punches used were real good...and the wordplay blew me away man fuck it 9/10 final score

I Got Sum 'Clever Vocab' No Doubt My 'text~is~wise' Take 'Action' To 'Close da Spam'As I Click And 'X~ur~Size'*
No 'Peace' I Spray 'insect-icides' So You 'rest~wit~flies' This Dude Tit~fucks Granny's With Them 'Wrinkled breast he rides'
/\ nice multies flow and struc clean an aight punch but not feelin all the ~ ' makes ya verse look messy

Give u lyrics, Let u Borrow My Vocals and u still would Not Live Up To 'Word~My~Spits'
Ur destined~to~trip, cuz my spits cause blockages, leavin u confused with 'No~chips'
/\ hmm not feelin this much no punch really kinda self-g but multi was there but not as strong as last bar

Ill read just~ya~lens, you cant edit~ur~shit, you complain more than yo sis on 'slimfast~diets'
Ight im flippin~ya~chips, while ur~sippin~on~piss, ur~shit couldn’t flow if u had period~leakages from 'ya~clit'
/\ er punch aight multi a bit messy again not beatin OMB

Dogg This Aint A Movie So Why u actin wise? ima 'Compress Ya Ass' 'Square-Up' Worse Than 'Quadrilaterals~factorized'
I'll Leave Ya Brain In Pieces~Covered Where 'da~napkin~lies' Have You 'Battle In Brail' After I 'attack~ur~eyes'
/\ nice bar good punch multi strong more like this please

I disrupt~peeps, leave ya bankrupt~with~ease and discup~knees, cause ya cant 'stand~out'
big up~da~breeze, causin~fatalities, the only time u suck~seed, is when I bust 'in~ya~mouth'**
/\ multi aight punch slightly played but there flow and struc good

Theres shit On ur PC Stool Cuz Its really dark where u sit, Did You 'Bite From ur Dad' Or Is That A 'shark on his tit'
I'll 'Throw~Fire~Spreading' And 'Hit~da~Sparks~Which~I~Lit', you Used Ya Moms Make~up Kit And Left 'lipstick marks on her clit'
/\ Used clit already in a bar to make a rhyme so not feelin as much mum lines played punch therefore lacked flow nearly tipped but jus managed to keep it goin

All in all i'd give a 6.5/10 multies were aight but OMB clearly had more experience in this battle i'm sorry to say...in my opinion he murdered you clearly u had an aight verse but u lost out on punches flow multies and wordplay...RTF on ma open mic :thumbup:

Voted For: One-Man-Band

Good Multi battle:

OMB......your flow was nice, an with those longt ass lines u managed to keep a good structure, your verse was riddled with multis that actually made sense an didn't seemed forced at all, you also threw some decent punch in there I especially liked the "life on a thread" line, good wordplay, but this a multi battle so heres my breakdown:

Multies: 8/10
Flow: 9/10
Structure: 6/10
Multi placement: 8/10
Overall: 31/40

White: Your verse had some nice multi syllable rhymes instead of all internals, but you flow was bad, an structure was as well, some multies seemed forced just there to be there, you had good wordplay too if this were a wordplay battle u woulda took it, a few punches nothing strong, but had some nice multies an some forced ones, here's my breakdown:

Multies: 8/10
Flow: 6/10
Structure: 5/10
Multi placement: 7/10
Overall: 26/40

Good Battle, no hate just my honest opinion
Vote: OMB

WHITE:
I Got Sum 'Clever Vocab' No Doubt My 'text~is~wise' Take 'Action' To 'Close da Spam'As I Click And 'X~ur~Size'*
No 'Peace' I Spray 'insect-icides' So You 'rest~wit~flies' This Dude Tit~fucks Granny's With Them 'Wrinkled breast he rides'
decent flow had a few good multis i wasnt feelin the breast one though it was to simple
Give u lyrics, Let u Borrow My Vocals and u still would Not Live Up To 'Word~My~Spits'
Ur destined~to~trip, cuz my spits cause blockages, leavin u confused with 'No~chips'
didnt flow that good multis wrent very good either
Ill read just~ya~lens, you cant edit~ur~shit, you complain more than yo sis on 'slimfast~diets'
Ight im flippin~ya~chips, while ur~sippin~on~piss, ur~shit couldn’t flow if u had period~leakages from 'ya~clit'
flow was alright multis nuttin to special
Dogg This Aint A Movie So Why u actin wise? ima 'Compress Ya Ass' 'Square-Up' Worse Than 'Quadrilaterals~factorized'
I'll Leave Ya Brain In Pieces~Covered Where 'da~napkin~lies' Have You 'Battle In Brail' After I 'attack~ur~eyes'
good flow multis were good nice punchline but that dont matter cause this is for multis and flow
I disrupt~peeps, leave ya bankrupt~with~ease and discup~knees, cause ya cant 'stand~out'
big up~da~breeze, causin~fatalities, the only time u suck~seed, is when I bust 'in~ya~mouth'**
again had a nice flow and good use of multis
Theres shit On ur PC Stool Cuz Its really dark where u sit, Did You 'Bite From ur Dad' Or Is That A 'shark on his tit'
I'll 'Throw~Fire~Spreading' And 'Hit~da~Sparks~Which~I~Lit', you Used Ya Moms Make~up Kit And Left 'lipstick marks on her clit'
mulits were alright in this one could have been better though

flow 7/10
multis 8/10
overall 15/20







this fag's as wack as wack gets, and that's just my first impression
usin my words as weapons, to burst and wreck him i'll teach this herb a lesson
put you in an even worse depression by sendin cursed verse in this nerds direction,
wow very good opener flow was on point and multis were nice
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scythin ya head. i bring more punches than that last cypher ya read.
graspin some scissors, “net”bitch, cos its obvious ya whole “lifes on a thread”
multis were good not as many as there should be considerin its a multi battle
fuckin netcees be wrecked easy cos in multi battles not even the best beat me
white tee? Please kid, you’re a rook.. half the cats on rv aint heard a ya the rest sleeping
decent multi good flow though
This stooge is ripped clean, fuck scythes, dude my fists reap… bruise him swiftly..
Check ya name.. how ya expect to out-multi me? Kid, ya cant even use the shift key
nice in both multi and flow
talking n squawkin shit, fuck that ill leave ya morbid fa startin this..
challengin me to a multi battle? man… youre more stuck up than a narcasist (so played -_-)
multis were good and flow still good
Open ya chest n splatter ya ribs, kid im bad as there is, n im at it to win
Blasts to ya chin, till ya battered n skinned from ya brain matter to shins
thats wut im talkin about if its a fuckin multi battle use fuckin multis lol nice
Ya makin me ball with laughter… cos when ya drop ya battles they all disasters
Scold n’ slash ya, punish this kid, n’ roll him after… just fa tryna kickit with the Multi-Master
nice closer still had nice flow good multis also

flow 9/10
multi 9/10
overall 18/20

good battle but my vote goes to OMB and now i know y no one likes to vote anymore this post took me about an hour lol and no hate jus my opinion

Voted For: WhiTe_Tee

i loved it it was good just a lil better then omb i think you got the multie master

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Voted For: One-Man-Band

aight this was a pretty good battle, the sructure was aight, which actually a bit streched for One Man Band (no offence bro). But as i said befor its like One Man Band ist the king of multies and he just killed it here, no offence White but OMB is just the king of multies, yall had some good personals though.

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Voted For: WhiTe_Tee

IIGHT THIS WAS A TUFFY BUT WHITE T TOOK THIS BCUS HE HAD A LIL BIT OF CREATIVITY WITH HIS MULTIZ OMB URS ALWAYS HOT BUT WT HAD A NICE WAY OF PUTTIN THEM..NO HATE OR D/R JUSS HONEST

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This was feedback posted for One-Man-Band
 

Ah battle of multis...agggghhhhh!!!!I dont think thats even tha point of a battle,sounds like sum super-hero shit ta me.


-this battles lame!!!!!!!!

no hate jus opinion.......

lmao... and you dqed my votes???..................

Pussi..quit Hatin This Was A Hot Battle Stop Dick Ridin Mayn

gaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwd cant u just take your loss?? why drag it out??