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Voted For: Eyvon

franchise yo struture is messed up work on dat though ok

i read yo verse but der wasnt any decnt punches nor any flow so elevate on dat aight mayne


eyvon- u had good flow and good punches i'll give dis to u

vote on my battles aight (honest)

Voted For: Eyvon

Etvon - good spit, your flow was hot, and your punches was srt8 fire.

Best Line - im serious, u must b delerious/
so dreary, the weariest/
sit yo ass back down bitch, now hear me on this/


Worst Line - triple, its just me myself and i/
i aint bout 2 lose a battle oer sum guy/

the - iight spit, you need some work on your flow.. and your punches need some work.

Best Line - yo this chick thinkin she the next eminem//this aint no 8 mile so u aint gunna win//

Worst Line - u a damn lucky girl yo, i only got six lines// cuz ide murder u even if i was a god damn mime


OVERALL - good battle, but I gotta give that too Eyvon, she came harder.. and her flow was better. The work on your flow.. and get some more thought out verses happenin.

VOTE - Eyvon

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Voted For: Eyvon

very newbieish battle it was vey weak.
punches- i gave it to eyvon because his punches ere more clear, personal and hit harder than all of franchise's
vocab- neither had high vocab although i think evyon got da one too, because franchise's vocab was relle basic
structure and flow- went to eyvon because his verse was much more clearer than franchise. franchise u need to elevate and work on ur structure and flow and take off dem slashes its to rookish. my vote goes to eyvon

Voted For: Eyvon

eyvon won diz i cul make sense ov her rhymez so she winz