This was feedback posted for the_crazy_one
 

uppin for some more votes yall come on dont sleep yall dont sleep

Voted For: mic-wrecker

ok flow good but you need better vocab and a better imagery see how mic said you have a couple hail marys you better sing and you said seek out drug dealers to employ me?big image diffrence there he had a more complex deep image while yours was straight up which is cool but not good in a topical to win mic had better vocab structure and gave a better image and in topicals that wins so he gets my vote for showing me a verbal picture better

This was feedback posted for mic-wrecker
 

checking votes for the EFL voting game...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155573

uppin this right here it needs to be closd...an with that votin game it should be in a matter of minutes.....UPPIN!!!!!!!

uppin this right here!!!!!
its been slept on too many days hours minutes watever

uppin this thread!!!!!
people need to fuckin vote

Voted For: the_crazy_one

I neva voted on topicals, but this 1 is a close 1!!! I like how t.c.o.(tha crazy one) went back and then brought it back and i like how third shift kept it on topic UNTIL u went to tha whole gurl and stacy adams in his ass and it wasnt needed basically, but ur closer kinda made up 4 it.
But this goes to t.c.o. for his individuality and his creativity

return tha fava..........
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This was feedback posted for the_crazy_one
 

wow ok.........................can't decide.....just wanted to say that:)

this shit is gettin ony my fuckin nerves......
vote ppl dayum

yo 3rd just go to battle closeings and close it and we will open it up again in frount lines so we can get more votes on it quicker

yea rite what is that gonna do....thats bullshit jus upp it more

ok what ever man its just boring havin all these open battle that are gettin slept on

i feel you so get out an up it fam caz this is terrible

Voted For: mic-wrecker

landslide....no im kiddin it was close...but i think that 3rd-shift takes this because of structure and it was much easier to read....um...his just made more sense then the crazy ones....keep goin the way ur flowin.....lol

crazy one you need to fix your structure...you may not think it but it is much easier to read when the structure is nice...
i didnt really understand some of the things you were trying to point out..elevate in all areas..aiight..

v/3rd shift