You gotta be kidding me...he actually voted on my battle...what type of bullshit is this nigga tryna pulll...go look in the lounge and see if thats fair...no wonder I have that many L's...

This was feedback posted for Mike Hawk
 

Man, this is just feedback for my man Mike, fuckin dont mess with E-Style Xclusive, You'll get clapped,

Plus this battle is gonna seem wierd to newb asse, since you aint in NOK no more, but Shabba throws them punches like shotputs nigka.

weeerd

^ Holla!...e-style in the building...
When the fuck will TRIGGA's vote be removed.

OMG...its not gonna get removed just because it was explained...when its obviously hate...wow.

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

break down.....

Flow - Exclusive (rhymez were on point)
Structure - Exclusive (separated barz so easily read...barz almost xact same length)
Vocab - Exclusive
Personalz - Hawk (not realli any but more then exclusive)

felt both versez but vote goes 2 exclusive...big up`z ta both

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^what was that haha wack shit lol you can ko that i dont care haha

Wow...look at that vote...........................

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Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

This was nothing but an all around ass kicking...lemme show ya why...

Opener - Ex...hawk called him a queer, thats weak
Closer - Ex...Not only hard, but hawks was self glorified
Punches - Ex...Tech, hard, punches, hawk wasnt even trying
Personals - Ex...hit harder than hawks one personal
Metas - Ex...won this one for the elastic line, dope
Multies - Ex...Elastic/plastic/sarcastic line, hawk had none
Structure - Tie...both were fine
Vocab - Ex...hawks was elementary
Wordplay - Ex...hawk didnt have wordplay period
Flow - Ex...Wasnt feelin hawks at all

As you can see^^^ pretty easy decision for me to pick Exclusive as the winner, very nice drop dawg. Hawk, elevate your punches/personals skills...also, try usin a lot better wordplay man, you can eleavate if you actually put in the effort, no hate dawg, if you need help with anyhting i would be glad to help you out, but in this battle, Ex took it, wtg/ Payce.

i thanks for that vote. uppin for more!

WTF???
I'm never battling in frontlines ever again...The guy had no fucking punches, no wordplay, and how was my closer self glorifying...wow.

Voted For: Mike Hawk

ok~
mike hawk~your opener was good,nice personals on the name, good way to start off,ok, second bar,,,was funny,good L.I. elevation line,nice punch,,3rd bar was ok, then you have the personal about NOK, which was a strong punch, affective here,hence a crew battle,,funny as well, and nice ending lines as well, this was a good verse, you said a lot in a little amount of space, but your punches were hard, your verse was full of them, and your flow never fell off....good job
exclusive~your verse was good,you tried to say a lot, but it messed your structure up,your lines were a little stretched as well, and you had no personals, you mentioned e-style but didnt really use it to be effective against him personally,and your punches lacked against him,but overall good drop,because you did have good vocab, but could have set it up better,.......



Return the favor................

nice vote theresa real vote explained well and he didnt hate on it and that exactly how you do it right there uppin

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

Good Drop From The Both Of Yall
Punches: I Prefered Exclusives Punches Kuz They Hit Harder... Mike Yours Were Weak.. Ive Seen Betta From U...Keep Practicin The Both Of Yall
Creativity/Word Play: Id Say This Was A Time Conciderin If Was Straight Forward... There Was A Lil From Both But Keep Practicin...

Multis: Tie... Both Had This But Couldn't Decide Who Had Better...

Personals: Exclusive... Nice Personals Dissin His Crew... Bcuz He Always Does Over-Front His Crew... NOK Died Kuz Ppl Left.. But Nice Try Mike But He Took This Part But Just By Abit

Vocab: Exclusive... Much Better... You Still Both Can Elevate Here But Personally I Believe Exlusive Took This Part..

Overall Winner: Exlusive, You Had Better Punches,Vocab N Slightly Better Personals... Mike Work On Your Punches... This Was The Aspect That Let You Down..

Fair Vote.. RTF

Voted For: Mike Hawk

wow mike hawk came kinda weak, but exclusive came even weaker... mikes punches were more original, the Li's elevation class line was strong... horribly closer though... all in all sub-par but Mike Takes this on originality- and his bars are flowable and not stretched across the page like his Oponents.

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