Yeah....nice drop for a beginner at audio. Basically what everyone else is saying. You need more emotion in your voice.....fake it if you got to. You ain't gotta raise your vocals though, you just got a deeper voice so they can't really make the words out as well as if you spit with a little emotion......and maybe shorten up the lines a bit....lol. But seriously, it helps with the flow :thumbup:

i was kinda feelin this in spots-- work on what everyone said- But when you feelin confident we should have an audio battle of the multis :)

^Word. multis = dope on audio